A new chapter of Breach of Trust has just been uploaded.
If you are encountering the story for the first time, Breach of Trust is an erotic thriller with some BDSM undertones, set in the Cayman Islands. It’s co-written with Dae of Sadistic Excess. You might want to start at the beginning – Chapter One.
For those of you who have already read the previous chapters, here’s Chapter Fourteen.
oooooo I’m a happy ALA
I read the entire thing and found it complex and dark. Elizabeth’s character could have been a little more developed.
Overall, It was well executed.
I hope that there is another chapter.
Hmmm. Now that is interesting that you should say that. I’m trying hard to NOT do my usual thing of writing reams and reams on a character’s inner being because, quite honestly, this is more of a thriller and less of the sort of thing I usually do, but I’ll definitely take your point about her being too cardboardish to heart in the polish.
Wow up to chapter 15 & I still want to know Jack’s workings! He has a wife? How did he start on what he does?
Elizabeth ended like I thought she would from the point that Jack slept with her… but that is because my mind is an odd scary place.
Thank you very much for posting this!
I think you ought to finish beautiful losers…. I’m hooked!!