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That’s a really great story. I stared reading on Thursday and couldn’t stop. At the end of chapter 14 I was clammoring for more. Thank you and thanks for not making me wait long. Keep up the good work!
I marathoned through all fifteen chapters in the past two hours, though I told myself I’d only read one or two since I had been planning to sleep at a reasonable time tonight. It’s just I absolutely could not stop devouring every word after the moment Jack reveals his knowledge of Elizabeth’s true identity. It got so tense at one moment, I had to pause for a couple seconds in between speed reading to calm my breathing down to a regular rate. Hope its not the end of the series yet, although I would be remiss if I didn’t admit that the story could perfectly end here as well.