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		<title>By: Aiona</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20999</link>
		<dc:creator>Aiona</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Aug 2012 18:51:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I love your thought about this.  I agree that sometimes the pat ending being happy is not always the greatest.  I myself go through a lot of unhappy endings in a day (I work in the medical field), and the last thing I wanna do at the end of the day is read about more unhappy endings.  When I am recharged (which isn&#039;t often these days), I prefer the thoughtful ending.  The ones that may or may not be &quot;happy&quot; but leave me in thought for days, sometimes months.  Sometimes ever after. &quot;Bladerunner&quot;&#039;s Director&#039;s Cut, for example.  (I saw the original happy-ending one first.) &quot;GATTACA&quot;&#039;s slightly-off ending, could be an example.  Wasn&#039;t completely happy, but wasn&#039;t completely sad either.  Was totally thrilled with &quot;S1Mon3&quot; even though eventually it veered into the happy ending.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love your thought about this.  I agree that sometimes the pat ending being happy is not always the greatest.  I myself go through a lot of unhappy endings in a day (I work in the medical field), and the last thing I wanna do at the end of the day is read about more unhappy endings.  When I am recharged (which isn&#8217;t often these days), I prefer the thoughtful ending.  The ones that may or may not be &#8220;happy&#8221; but leave me in thought for days, sometimes months.  Sometimes ever after. &#8220;Bladerunner&#8221;&#8216;s Director&#8217;s Cut, for example.  (I saw the original happy-ending one first.) &#8220;GATTACA&#8221;&#8216;s slightly-off ending, could be an example.  Wasn&#8217;t completely happy, but wasn&#8217;t completely sad either.  Was totally thrilled with &#8220;S1Mon3&#8243; even though eventually it veered into the happy ending.</p>
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		<title>By: Harper Eliot</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20982</link>
		<dc:creator>Harper Eliot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Aug 2012 17:01:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Beautifully and reasonably ranted out there.

Going back to the thing about beginnings and endings, this is something I&#039;ve been thinking about recently. Earlier in the year, I had a couple of lectures on Beginnings, Middles and Endings, and I think we were particularly looking at Wordsworth&#039;s The Prelude, and it came up in discussion that sometimes works of fiction start long after the beginning of the story, or finish before the end of the story. And then there are words where the continuity isn&#039;t chronological, where you&#039;re purposefully set into the middle of the story, or the end, and sometimes brought back to the beginning - sometimes not.

I find the idea really fascinating. I&#039;m not sure what to do with it, but I&#039;m always on the look out for fiction that plays around with its chronology. I&#039;m also highly aware that most of my fiction happens in the middle, and neglects both the beginning and the end; but that is on purpose. Either way, I&#039;m fairly certain you can play around with your readers&#039; perception and experience by being aware of the distinctions. Just… how?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beautifully and reasonably ranted out there.</p>
<p>Going back to the thing about beginnings and endings, this is something I&#8217;ve been thinking about recently. Earlier in the year, I had a couple of lectures on Beginnings, Middles and Endings, and I think we were particularly looking at Wordsworth&#8217;s The Prelude, and it came up in discussion that sometimes works of fiction start long after the beginning of the story, or finish before the end of the story. And then there are words where the continuity isn&#8217;t chronological, where you&#8217;re purposefully set into the middle of the story, or the end, and sometimes brought back to the beginning &#8211; sometimes not.</p>
<p>I find the idea really fascinating. I&#8217;m not sure what to do with it, but I&#8217;m always on the look out for fiction that plays around with its chronology. I&#8217;m also highly aware that most of my fiction happens in the middle, and neglects both the beginning and the end; but that is on purpose. Either way, I&#8217;m fairly certain you can play around with your readers&#8217; perception and experience by being aware of the distinctions. Just… how?</p>
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		<title>By: K</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20977</link>
		<dc:creator>K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 21:09:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Now I feel extra stupid for the email where I said I wanted &quot;all the endings&quot; and recalled the youth adventure novels that let you choose the hero&#039;s next steps. Does it help that I quite love European movies? Most of those don&#039;t have tidy wrapped up endings. I find that stories that aren&#039;t wrapped up stay with me much longer. My brain munches on them as I go about my daily business like its trying to work out a problem. It&#039;s the difference between healthy food that sustains you and junk food that only momentarily satisfies. I may want every ending but I&#039;m not shallow enough to think that what I want is what&#039;s good for me.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now I feel extra stupid for the email where I said I wanted &#8220;all the endings&#8221; and recalled the youth adventure novels that let you choose the hero&#8217;s next steps. Does it help that I quite love European movies? Most of those don&#8217;t have tidy wrapped up endings. I find that stories that aren&#8217;t wrapped up stay with me much longer. My brain munches on them as I go about my daily business like its trying to work out a problem. It&#8217;s the difference between healthy food that sustains you and junk food that only momentarily satisfies. I may want every ending but I&#8217;m not shallow enough to think that what I want is what&#8217;s good for me.</p>
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		<title>By: Sophia, NOT Loren!</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sophia, NOT Loren!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 19:27:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Very good rant indeed. I&#039;d have written something equally rant-like, had I not been nearing 27 hours awake!

We&#039;ve turned the world to shit, and the reason most of us don&#039;t realize it has a lot to do with the &quot;comfort&quot; of our Skinner Boxes.  What wonderfully well-conditioned operants we are!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very good rant indeed. I&#8217;d have written something equally rant-like, had I not been nearing 27 hours awake!</p>
<p>We&#8217;ve turned the world to shit, and the reason most of us don&#8217;t realize it has a lot to do with the &#8220;comfort&#8221; of our Skinner Boxes.  What wonderfully well-conditioned operants we are!</p>
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		<title>By: Korhomme</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20975</link>
		<dc:creator>Korhomme</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 18:54:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m not a film buff, but aren&#039;t there &quot;art films&quot; where the director does his (her) own thing, without reference to what the audience expects?

And as for tailoring your responses to what the audience wants, surely politicians are the most egregious with their &quot;focus groups&quot;? Their formulated, philosophically corrected concepts are in fact no more than a response to what the people want. The ultimate in sophism, a modern version of &quot;bread and circuses&quot;?

And is the pandering to market research when writing a novel what separates &quot;literature&quot; from &quot;brain candy&quot;? There&#039;s nothing wrong with brain candy, we all need a respite at times, and &quot;literature&quot; can be simply just too much like hard work. Is one characteristic of literature that it gives us an ending that is &quot;unexpected&quot;, something that we have to work towards? I don&#039;t know, it&#039;s just a thought.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not a film buff, but aren&#8217;t there &#8220;art films&#8221; where the director does his (her) own thing, without reference to what the audience expects?</p>
<p>And as for tailoring your responses to what the audience wants, surely politicians are the most egregious with their &#8220;focus groups&#8221;? Their formulated, philosophically corrected concepts are in fact no more than a response to what the people want. The ultimate in sophism, a modern version of &#8220;bread and circuses&#8221;?</p>
<p>And is the pandering to market research when writing a novel what separates &#8220;literature&#8221; from &#8220;brain candy&#8221;? There&#8217;s nothing wrong with brain candy, we all need a respite at times, and &#8220;literature&#8221; can be simply just too much like hard work. Is one characteristic of literature that it gives us an ending that is &#8220;unexpected&#8221;, something that we have to work towards? I don&#8217;t know, it&#8217;s just a thought.</p>
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		<title>By: Remittance Girl</title>
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		<dc:creator>Remittance Girl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 15:29:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good rant.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good rant.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeff</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20973</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 15:04:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Rant alert!
The worst of it is how we have come to expect those same outcomes in our lives.
We&#039;ve become completely unrealistic with our expectations simply because we&#039;ve been bombarded with HEA from the moment we were plunked in front of the idiot box.
As an audience we have been reduced to subjects of market research.  

Whats worse is we&#039;ve become impatient too. 
Remember simpler times, when we&#039;d listen to the radio for hours , waiting for a favourite song to be played? Remember request lines? The anticipation and the absolute joy that would come as a result of waiting patiently and being rewarded!

Now when we want something ,it HAS to be instantaneous or we are frustrated and disappointed. 
We&#039;ve been conditioned to expect our happy endings and everything else , on cue... on demand. 
Our juices flow when we don&#039;t know the outcome, when it isn&#039;t always what we have come to expect.
We have turned the world to shit, and most of don&#039;t even realize it.

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rant alert!<br />
The worst of it is how we have come to expect those same outcomes in our lives.<br />
We&#8217;ve become completely unrealistic with our expectations simply because we&#8217;ve been bombarded with HEA from the moment we were plunked in front of the idiot box.<br />
As an audience we have been reduced to subjects of market research.  </p>
<p>Whats worse is we&#8217;ve become impatient too.<br />
Remember simpler times, when we&#8217;d listen to the radio for hours , waiting for a favourite song to be played? Remember request lines? The anticipation and the absolute joy that would come as a result of waiting patiently and being rewarded!</p>
<p>Now when we want something ,it HAS to be instantaneous or we are frustrated and disappointed.<br />
We&#8217;ve been conditioned to expect our happy endings and everything else , on cue&#8230; on demand.<br />
Our juices flow when we don&#8217;t know the outcome, when it isn&#8217;t always what we have come to expect.<br />
We have turned the world to shit, and most of don&#8217;t even realize it.</p>
<p>end of rant.</p>
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		<title>By: Sophia, NOT Loren!</title>
		<link>http://remittancegirl.com/blogpost/the-sense-of-an-ending/comment-page-1/#comment-20972</link>
		<dc:creator>Sophia, NOT Loren!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Aug 2012 08:48:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[First thing I thought of when I finished reading... the changed ending for the 2007 version of &quot;I Am Legend&quot; starring Will Smith.

Theatrical release &quot;happy ending&quot;: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQfzvVeEkGI

Original ending, and from what I understand much closer to the novel itself: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOWeyGX5Bgk

So we get a film where the bad guys all get killed, the hero becomes martyr, the survivors bring &quot;the cure&quot; to the rest of the world for an HEA ending...

Your Titanic example didn&#039;t seem an exaggeration at all.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First thing I thought of when I finished reading&#8230; the changed ending for the 2007 version of &#8220;I Am Legend&#8221; starring Will Smith.</p>
<p>Theatrical release &#8220;happy ending&#8221;: <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQfzvVeEkGI" rel="nofollow">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQfzvVeEkGI</a></p>
<p>Original ending, and from what I understand much closer to the novel itself: <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOWeyGX5Bgk" rel="nofollow">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOWeyGX5Bgk</a></p>
<p>So we get a film where the bad guys all get killed, the hero becomes martyr, the survivors bring &#8220;the cure&#8221; to the rest of the world for an HEA ending&#8230;</p>
<p>Your Titanic example didn&#8217;t seem an exaggeration at all.</p>
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