This was written for Alison Tyler’s “Flash Fuck Me Baby” challenge. 100 words of concupiscence. It was also tweeted live, under the hashtag #flashfuckingcontest 30 mins before it was posted:
“I love it when you squeal,” he says.
After he’s slid his rigid cock through the slash of my lust, coating himself slippery with my cunt’s fluid greed until I can’t bear another stroke. Until I writhe in something verging on anger and growl, “Fuck me: do it now.”
That initial penetration is sweet like no other. Better than the sweat or the stretch or the orgasm that comes later. More potent than his rasping breath on my cheek or the slap of his flesh against mine. Good as those things are, nothing makes me squeal like that first thrust.
Other writers to post twitter versions of the flash challenge were @_Monocle_ @AislingWeaver @steveh11 @eroticnotebook @WarriorAlcyone @pillow_talker and @DangerousSweets
FUCK, that’s hot!
I had a read of Alison’s challenge, and the various twitterotica comments on it. I’m not trying to creep or anything, but even if I hadn’t read yours on your site first, I’d have been able to identify you as the author immediately, because your use of language is so visceral and evocative.
*beam and blush* Thank you!
Very nice, truth in the words…
*applauds* Yet another one that makes us all shift in our seats & nod our heads in agreement
Keep posting & I’ll keep reading 