The salt water mixed with her spit and I still thought I could live on it. I felt her nipples erect as they brushed against mine. All I could think of now was, if my arms were longer, I could finger her and still feel her body flat against mine all the way down.
Where the sea meets the sand, we crawled over each other, kissing and stroking and probing until we found the perfect place, the perfect way to lie and enter each other. Slightly apart, with our legs tangled in the water and our bodies on the wet sand.
Tina wasn’t shouting out instructions. When I pushed a third finger into her, letting my palm slide over an incredibly erect clit with each thrust, I knew exactly where she was. Her own fingers became insistent and fluid, fucking into me, telling me how she wanted it.
…this story now appears in the “Coming Together Anthology: Remittance Girl” which is a collection of my work. All proceeds from this book go to support free speech, through the ACLU.
You had me from “freckles spilling tan confetti over milk-white skin.” You still had me at “I remember everything.” A fine story, Rgrl, full of heat and longing.
I suddenly feel so sad after reading that, RG. In the best possible way one can feel sad from a story. This remembrance of a long ago memory, cherished & treasured, beautifully told, just makes me sentimental and melancholy. Well done, love, very well done.
ah, memories. good story
One of the first (if not the very first) of your stories I read, and one of my favourites. It still gives me the chills, even more now that I know what to expect. Beautifully constructed, thank you for re-posting. Ciao, Michael.
I can’t believe I haven’t read this one before, as many times as I’ve read through your works.
And it made me cry.
Sexy, beautiful, honest, poignant.
A couple of months ago, when I read this story for the first time, I loved it as much as your others. But life changes – I’ve changed – and now this story means more to me than I ever thought it could.
Thank you.
exquisite… thank you for the experience
>^.^<
Just brilliant RG. Beautiful story and writing but it was the ending that took my breath away. Just brings up the memories of loves lost and then remembered..
… wow…i don’t really know what to say to that so i’m just going to agree with City Different, Tess, E_Woman, and joe. Thank you for creating these beautiful stories for our enjoyment.
Wonderful. The ending was beautifully heartbreaking. What a gift.
i lived the beach
…15 years on, still miss you sometimes, G. my first youth ended when we did.
RG, thank you; yours are the best stories.
Simply breathtaking, my dear. The imagery is flawless as usual, but I love that I am left with mystery, desire and so many other thoughts. And an erection, of course. I’m only human.
You must know I like this one, the imagery. Nothing better than two people, into solely each other.
It has been some time since I have read, and I have never posted, but I am compelled to tell you that this story has always been my favorite. It is beautiful.
And in appreciation of your comment, I’ll put the full story back up in April.