Comments on: The Night That Frank Scored #shortstory #erotica

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Fri, 13 Jul 2012 01:45:14 +0000

Yeah, I identify with him too.

By: Jerry Kircus

Jerry Kircus — Thu, 12 Jul 2012 20:46:15 +0000

As a fat, bald 70 year old guy, I was struck with meloncholy as I had to identify with Frank. OK, 3 cardios a week and get my thyroid checked. I am not dead yet. Gotta go.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Tue, 10 Jul 2012 23:52:28 +0000

Uh. No. This is fiction.

By: ImageMundi

ImageMundi — Tue, 10 Jul 2012 20:14:12 +0000

I just love the succubus’ view on “jerks”. Is that really you?

By: TFP

TFP — Sun, 17 Jun 2012 18:11:10 +0000

RG,

“…Its not genetic.” I liked that part.

Thank you,
~TFP

By: Ishmael Goat

Ishmael Goat — Sat, 26 May 2012 12:19:33 +0000

I try very hard not to be an asshole. It is a habit, like making sure my fly is zipped. You got past the habit, and what a relief. Thank you for giving me this opportunity to be Frank.

I’ve dreamed secretly of being the Frank in “Frank and I” but the unlikelihood was the very attraction. (Well, one attraction.) Perhaps this is the key, not being so afraid of being an asshole.

There is a connection, here, with the thoughts in your essay on Offense and the woman with the tee shirt. No surprise here, but giving due.

Be well,
Ishmael G

PS and thanks again.

By: Vida

Vida — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 21:29:31 +0000

I love it! The succubus with a heart of gold! I think it is erotic, I think human insecurities and realities should be in there far more often along with the giant erections, and buffness and pertness.

By: Meow

Meow — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 13:44:08 +0000

Absolutely beautiful, funny and super creative!!

By: Lady Grinning Soul

Lady Grinning Soul — Fri, 09 Mar 2012 16:07:16 +0000

Oh yes… I love this. Literature and food for thought.

By: Corinna Parr

Corinna Parr — Mon, 05 Mar 2012 14:36:10 +0000

I love this. Loooooove this. It’s a twist on the classic succubus MO that is, yes, both dark and full of humor. I think my favorite bite was how you explored the hows and whys of a succubus feeding. And hey, someone somewhere would have their toes curled, reading it.