Comments on: The Quitter http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/ Stories, Series, Novellas and Online erotica Wed, 22 May 2013 03:21:09 +0000 hourly 1 By: Mp http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21711 Mp Mon, 31 Dec 2012 06:21:25 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21711 Reminded me of a beach house I rented in Australia and how much I wish that adventure had been less Indiana Jones and more Remittance Girl in nature. Thanks for a great little read.

]]> By: Remittance Girl http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21646 Remittance Girl Tue, 18 Dec 2012 15:09:50 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21646 Without a cigarette?

]]> By: Sara http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21644 Sara Tue, 18 Dec 2012 14:34:49 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21644 Just lovely! And far too distracting to read when I did — first thing in the morning, at work!

]]> By: FtFagos http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21285 FtFagos Fri, 12 Oct 2012 09:54:01 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21285 Damn. Wished I’d thought of that one. Both for a story and for a way to quit the evil weed. First rate, glad I chanced upon you and your stories.

FtF

]]> By: Remittance Girl http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21059 Remittance Girl Sun, 02 Sep 2012 04:17:01 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21059 *grin*

I’m glad you approve. I’m not as deft a hand at F/m stories. But I’m practicing.

]]> By: Forrest Franks http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-21058 Forrest Franks Sun, 02 Sep 2012 04:12:47 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-21058 I like this story. It’s curiously misleading at the start. Then as the story unfolds, it shows a confident woman who slowly realizes shehAaron been delivered an obedient little love toy on a platter. Sneaky very sneaky :)

]]> By: Cindy http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-20979 Cindy Thu, 16 Aug 2012 04:50:33 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-20979 The renter revolution will start with the perverts standing up for their right to be fucked by owners in the wilderness.

Dr One

]]> By: Remittance Girl http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-20813 Remittance Girl Wed, 25 Jul 2012 09:56:57 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-20813 I love that you point out the typos! Thank you so much for doing it. Makes my ass look better in the long run :D

]]> By: George http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-20812 George Wed, 25 Jul 2012 05:00:17 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-20812 I liked how Carson was unsure. Thanks for the story. Also, your last sentence reads “You just need the proper level of distraction, willing and obedient helper, and a cabin in the woods.” Maybe add an “a” before willing, or change helper to “help” ? And I’m trusting you to tell me if you don’t want the typos mentioned. I don’t mean to see them, just sometimes I do and I feel that there’s no use in seeing them if I don’t let the author know. Also, my own writing is full of errors.

]]> By: WordsmithingImp http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/the-quitter/comment-page-1/#comment-20710 WordsmithingImp Sun, 08 Jul 2012 01:10:34 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=4360#comment-20710 ““Yes, all of it. You’re…” I looked down at the floor at his feet, “…leaking.””

I just laughed aloud there. What a delightful pair of characters you wrote up.

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