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You might know already but the Splinter needs a bit of editing. Repeats of passages…
Wonderful story!
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I am still patiently (barely) waiting for the rest of Beautiful Losers. I have been on pins and needles wondering when there is going to be more. I am totally addicted to this story and will not be able to rest until I get to read the conclusion.
RG, I hope you will have something for us soon.
OMG let me just say bravo! I am absolutely enthralled with your series Beatiful Losers! I found your website about two days ago and immediatly became addicted..i literally finished Beatiful Losers in one day..lol. What happens? I’m DYING to know!
As much as I liked the characterizations in Dinner Party – I really liked Beautiful Losers. I want to see that series finished desperately. With the hopes that they are not losers when it’s finished.
I love all your characterizations, though. New to the genre – I’ve quickly become a fan of your writing.
I’d love to see a a resolution to Beautiful Losers. It is too good a story to be left hanging.
My only criticism of the story is that it has slightly too many Shira-freaking-out-and-getting-reassured scenes. It’s very realistic, but gets a little old to read. (At least for me.)
I love what you did with the changing POV in Waiting Room. It is perhaps my favourite of your series (although that is a tough call).
I just found your podcast yesterday and I have fallen in love with your story Beautiful Losers. It’s addicting. The minute I was done listening to chapter 5 I went on this site to read the rest that you had. It was like a stab to my soul to see it was not done. I feel connected to all the characters and to not know what happened to them is torture. Please post the rest of the story.
“The Dinner Party” was good but “Beautiful Loser”
was great. I had a variety of emotions while reading it. I loved this story. I hope you write another.