Comments on: Series

By: Barb

Barb — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 04:13:02 +0000

“The Dinner Party” was good but “Beautiful Loser”

was great. I had a variety of emotions while reading it. I loved this story. I hope you write another.

By: Chika

Chika — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 21:14:22 +0000

I just found your podcast yesterday and I have fallen in love with your story Beautiful Losers. It’s addicting. The minute I was done listening to chapter 5 I went on this site to read the rest that you had. It was like a stab to my soul to see it was not done. I feel connected to all the characters and to not know what happened to them is torture. Please post the rest of the story.

By: S

Thu, 14 Jan 2010 08:44:56 +0000

I love what you did with the changing POV in Waiting Room. It is perhaps my favourite of your series (although that is a tough call).

By: S

Thu, 14 Jan 2010 08:43:04 +0000

I’d love to see a a resolution to Beautiful Losers. It is too good a story to be left hanging.

My only criticism of the story is that it has slightly too many Shira-freaking-out-and-getting-reassured scenes. It’s very realistic, but gets a little old to read. (At least for me.)

By: ALA

ALA — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 02:45:56 +0000

As much as I liked the characterizations in Dinner Party – I really liked Beautiful Losers. I want to see that series finished desperately. With the hopes that they are not losers when it’s finished.

I love all your characterizations, though. New to the genre – I’ve quickly become a fan of your writing.

By: Cindi Villalobos

Cindi Villalobos — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 19:31:27 +0000

OMG let me just say bravo! I am absolutely enthralled with your series Beatiful Losers! I found your website about two days ago and immediatly became addicted..i literally finished Beatiful Losers in one day..lol. What happens? I’m DYING to know!

By: Shan M

Shan M — Sat, 29 Aug 2009 04:06:53 +0000

I am still patiently (barely) waiting for the rest of Beautiful Losers. I have been on pins and needles wondering when there is going to be more. I am totally addicted to this story and will not be able to rest until I get to read the conclusion.

RG, I hope you will have something for us soon.

By: Maya

Maya — Wed, 05 Aug 2009 02:12:26 +0000

You might know already but the Splinter needs a bit of editing. Repeats of passages…

Wonderful story!