Comments on: Better Left Unsaid

By: Trixibelle

Trixibelle — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 11:16:53 +0000

Oh man. I have just discovered this website and I am sooooooo happy I have. This story just made me very, VERY happy.

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[...] Soiled – by LGS The (Female) Phenomenon of Emotional Masochism – by LGS @remittancegirl Better Left Unsaid – by Remittance Girl @PhoenixW_R @JackandJillcpl AislingWeaver.com – Aisling [...]

By: Morag

Morag — Mon, 05 Sep 2011 09:57:01 +0000

I haven’t read this one before.

It REALLY works for me! Thanks, RG.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sun, 04 Sep 2011 08:23:49 +0000

I’ve gone through and fixed the punctuation. Thanks for diligently reading through it despite the weird characters. (er, not the literary ones)

By: Thalia

Thalia — Sun, 04 Sep 2011 07:22:39 +0000

this story is lean and purposeful. It pivots neatly from 2 moments of courage– when the narrator confides her fantasies to the man, and when the man returns to her.

She’s spinning lurid and detailed fantasy about a middle aged man in a dentist waiting room!! That’s transgressive– normality juxtaposed with turgid genitals. Smashing the absurd stereotype that men think about sex 3 times a minute and women think about sex three times a week.

I linked back from your recent post– it looks like you had “smart quotes” and “smart apostrophes” in the original text, and the font doesn’t support. Makes it difficult to read, I had to spring from word to word like a skeeter bug.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sun, 04 Sep 2011 01:41:49 +0000

Ack, I’m sorry. It happened when I transferred my files over from one server to another. I’ll try to seek out the stories it is on and fix them.

By: Eva

Eva — Sun, 04 Sep 2011 00:45:15 +0000

I just stumbled across your site a few hours ago and have been completely engrossed in your work I love it!!! You are amazing and so very talented!! I have started reading this story and a few others, I am having a little trouble with it there are a bunch of these €™ marks and others like them going through some of your stories are they “water marks” or cc protection? Again you are amazing and I hope you are able to write again soon big hugs!

By: mermaid

mermaid — Wed, 02 Jun 2010 13:41:26 +0000

I love this story. The classic fantasy turns to reaility is usually written with a degree of suspended reality, but yours is grounded and palpable. The details are wonderful. I love the moment when they get back to the room and her reason tries to dissect what is happening….”are you really sure you want to psychoanalyze this?” it’s a great pivot point. It captures that moment of conflict we all have between fantasy and reality. When she plunges back in, head first, it is all the more erotic….

By: miss_m

miss_m — Sun, 14 Mar 2010 16:27:00 +0000

Woww, the story is erotically smart! You are very, very good at plotting (and of course, at using beautiful words!). Like for Better Left Unsaid, you just twisted common tales of â€˜meeting of two strangersâ€™ and â€˜fantasizing about fatherly spankingâ€™ into something entirely new. It shows us when fantasy (wicked naughty fantasy! Ha!) sets apart from reality, and how fantasy controls reality. Although I too felt interrupted while reading about the receptionist re-appointing our girl, the scene portraits that every well. The fact that she is a middle aged woman is smart too!

By: Heidi

Heidi — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 01:54:02 +0000

Not to be impatient but I’m still missing The Illustrated Teacher. Also wanted to tell you that Breach is very very good!! Just finished reading it.