Comments on: Hole http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/ Erotica: Stories, Series and Novellas Mon, 28 May 2012 01:01:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Abigail http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-18448 Abigail Thu, 25 Aug 2011 22:04:50 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-18448 Read this in "Too Much Boogie" a few days ago. One of my top 5 in the collection. The sexual tension and deprivation all in such a neat package. There so much told about the characters by what they don't do. Read this in “Too Much Boogie” a few days ago. One of my top 5 in the collection. The sexual tension and deprivation all in such a neat package. There so much told about the characters by what they don’t do.

]]> By: ellinoz http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-624 ellinoz Sat, 23 Oct 2010 10:22:54 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-624 Kept me right here, enthralled, caught more tightly in your spell with each word, with each image you painted in my head. Lovely writing RG. Thank you. Kept me right here, enthralled, caught more tightly in your spell with each word, with each image you painted in my head. Lovely writing RG. Thank you.

]]> By: Ashes http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-623 Ashes Mon, 08 Mar 2010 22:53:56 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-623 So fantastically done. I am drawn in to wondering why "She tugged against the grip that held, then slipped, then held again, suddenly terrified" Most people don't have that reaction unless they have been trapped & helpless before... Hmmm very nicely done as always you have drawn me in & made me want ;) Thank you! So fantastically done.

I am drawn in to wondering why “She tugged against the grip that held, then slipped, then held again, suddenly terrified” Most people don’t have that reaction unless they have been trapped & helpless before…

Hmmm very nicely done as always you have drawn me in & made me want ;)

Thank you!

]]> By: Ashley St. Clair http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-622 Ashley St. Clair Mon, 18 Jan 2010 05:22:33 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-622 I haven't read your work in a little while. It's been accumulating in my RSS reader, awaiting some free time—and I'm glad to have found some finally. This was a great story with which to kick off my mini-marathon of erotica. If all the pieces I'll be reading tonight are this good…well, it might be more than I can handle. It was an excellent piece, balancing wonderful writing with just the right amount of sex, perfect character development, and an intense rush from having to think so much about everything that was going on. I look forward to all that lies in store. ♥ Ash I haven’t read your work in a little while. It’s been accumulating in my RSS reader, awaiting some free time—and I’m glad to have found some finally. This was a great story with which to kick off my mini-marathon of erotica. If all the pieces I’ll be reading tonight are this good…well, it might be more than I can handle. It was an excellent piece, balancing wonderful writing with just the right amount of sex, perfect character development, and an intense rush from having to think so much about everything that was going on. I look forward to all that lies in store.

♥ Ash

]]> By: S http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-621 S Thu, 14 Jan 2010 08:01:10 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-621 Sorry, would you mind changing the name on my previous post or deleting? There was a little spazzy clicking on my end. Sorry, would you mind changing the name on my previous post or deleting? There was a little spazzy clicking on my end.

]]> By: mikaloff@gmail.com http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-620 mikaloff@gmail.com Thu, 14 Jan 2010 07:53:30 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-620 I'm one of those annoying vultures who has been reading your stories without commenting. I just don't think I have anything to say that is interesting enough to follow what you've written. But, here goes... I think the reason your stories stay with me so long is all the things you don't say. Why is she this way? Has something happened to her, or is it just the way she has always been put together? What happens next? Do they meet again online or in real life, or does she avoid him now that he has come too close? The bit with the chemicals fizzing in her veins at the end was a nice touch. I’m one of those annoying vultures who has been reading your stories without commenting. I just don’t think I have anything to say that is interesting enough to follow what you’ve written. But, here goes…

I think the reason your stories stay with me so long is all the things you don’t say. Why is she this way? Has something happened to her, or is it just the way she has always been put together? What happens next? Do they meet again online or in real life, or does she avoid him now that he has come too close?

The bit with the chemicals fizzing in her veins at the end was a nice touch.

]]> By: gg http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-619 gg Thu, 14 Jan 2010 01:16:45 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-619 Even formulating a concise response for this story is a challenge at the moment ... This one packs a punch that i find incredibly sad. Someone touched on 'her protecting him' in one of the earlier comments - somehow that resonates. Perhaps she feels that sparing him the pain of losing her far out-weighs the pain of not truly knowing her to begin with. i don't know, it's just a thought, but i think she's hiding something. This stirs up the emotional kettle for me, rg. Yet, as always - told with an expert and critical eye. Even formulating a concise response for this story is a challenge at the moment … This one packs a punch that i find incredibly sad.

Someone touched on ‘her protecting him’ in one of the earlier comments – somehow that resonates. Perhaps she feels that sparing him the pain of losing her far out-weighs the pain of not truly knowing her to begin with. i don’t know, it’s just a thought, but i think she’s hiding something.

This stirs up the emotional kettle for me, rg.

Yet, as always – told with an expert and critical eye.

]]> By: Holly http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-618 Holly Wed, 13 Jan 2010 04:03:38 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-618 As always, you paint a picture for the mind. You never disappoint. Thanks. As always, you paint a picture for the mind. You never disappoint. Thanks.

]]> By: max http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-617 max Mon, 11 Jan 2010 19:30:52 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-617 love it. great tension. love it. great tension.

]]> By: Elise http://remittancegirl.com/eroticshortstories/hole/comment-page-1/#comment-616 Elise Mon, 11 Jan 2010 07:16:26 +0000 http://remittancegirl.com/?p=657#comment-616 I was distracted by life but have started reading again today. As an aspiring writer I learn a lot from you. Thank you. I was distracted by life but have started reading again today. As an aspiring writer I learn a lot from you. Thank you.

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