11 Responses to Museum Piece (First Course)

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   mina on December 13, 2009 at 7:51 am

   *shivers* oh i like…

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   Jean Baptiste on December 13, 2009 at 7:38 pm

   Very nice – one of your better short stories….

   I wish there was something negative and critical that I could write, but no.

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     Remittance Girl on December 13, 2009 at 9:22 pm

     Wow, I’m surprised. Personally, I think the whole series is lightweight stroke fiction, but hey. Each to his own.

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       NQM on December 14, 2009 at 4:30 am

       Lightweight stroke fiction can be done to perfection, why not?

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         Remittance Girl on December 14, 2009 at 1:23 pm

         Oh, it most definitely can. But I do have trouble keeping up interest in it as a writer. My earlier comment was not a snub at stroke fiction – not at all. But everyone probably writes best when dealing with subject matter that really compels them. This isn’t, in my estimation, my best work.

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   D on December 14, 2009 at 6:00 am

   Wow, as ever. I love that last sentance.. leaves you somehow unsettled, and suits the mood of the whole piece so well.x

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   Caramella on December 14, 2009 at 8:47 am

   I’ve enjoyed this series. There’s something very appealing about being seduced by strangers. Looking forward to further installments!

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     Remittance Girl on December 14, 2009 at 1:24 pm

     I will try and produce them as the whimsey takes me. I do have to be in a certain mood to write this sort of stuff. It doesn’t have a great deal of depth for me. But yes, it’s fun.

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   E_Woman on December 16, 2009 at 5:05 am

   You’ve touched a very personal chord in me with this series of sensual glimpses. My boyfriend and I have this type of relationship.. I feel like you’ve reached directly into my life and private fantasies and realized it in words..

   Thank you…

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   Ashes on December 24, 2009 at 8:35 am

   Wow I have enjoyed this one a lot. My deepest apologizes that I read & ran on the first few of this one. I am very much looking forward to more!

   Keep posting & I will keep reading!

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   Kate on January 2, 2010 at 10:20 am

   Wow, Remittance Girl, you really hit these just right. You may not have intended this series as your Pièce de résistance, but I think, however casually, you managed to bring all of the right elements together to create something really good. Usually once I’ve read something like this once I’m done with it, but I’m on my third pass of these, now, and they still, um, do the trick. Very well done.

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