Comments on: Museum Piece (First Course)

By: Kate

Kate — Sat, 02 Jan 2010 03:20:43 +0000

Wow, Remittance Girl, you really hit these just right. You may not have intended this series as your PiÃ¨ce de rÃ©sistance, but I think, however casually, you managed to bring all of the right elements together to create something really good. Usually once I’ve read something like this once I’m done with it, but I’m on my third pass of these, now, and they still, um, do the trick. Very well done.

By: Ashes

Ashes — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 01:35:59 +0000

Wow I have enjoyed this one a lot. My deepest apologizes that I read & ran on the first few of this one. I am very much looking forward to more!

Keep posting & I will keep reading!

By: E_Woman

E_Woman — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 22:05:10 +0000

You’ve touched a very personal chord in me with this series of sensual glimpses. My boyfriend and I have this type of relationship.. I feel like you’ve reached directly into my life and private fantasies and realized it in words..

Thank you…

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 06:24:56 +0000

I will try and produce them as the whimsey takes me. I do have to be in a certain mood to write this sort of stuff. It doesn’t have a great deal of depth for me. But yes, it’s fun.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 06:23:29 +0000

Oh, it most definitely can. But I do have trouble keeping up interest in it as a writer. My earlier comment was not a snub at stroke fiction – not at all. But everyone probably writes best when dealing with subject matter that really compels them. This isn’t, in my estimation, my best work.

By: Caramella

Caramella — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 01:47:44 +0000

I’ve enjoyed this series. There’s something very appealing about being seduced by strangers. Looking forward to further installments!

By: D

Sun, 13 Dec 2009 23:00:55 +0000

Wow, as ever. I love that last sentance.. leaves you somehow unsettled, and suits the mood of the whole piece so well.x

By: NQM

NQM — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:30:30 +0000

Lightweight stroke fiction can be done to perfection, why not?

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 14:22:51 +0000

Wow, I’m surprised. Personally, I think the whole series is lightweight stroke fiction, but hey. Each to his own.

By: Jean Baptiste

Jean Baptiste — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 12:38:12 +0000

Very nice – one of your better short stories….

I wish there was something negative and critical that I could write, but no.