Comments on: Museum Piece (Starting with Dessert)

By: Will Crimson

Will Crimson — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 17:47:18 +0000

///I sighed, watching the divinely red, divinely plump mouth close around the utensilâ€™s silver neck…//

The most erotic line in the story. Your attention to color, in all your stories, adds an extra layer of enjoyment. But the most erotic facet of your stories, RM, is the believability of your characters – their hesitation, overreach and surprise. Thanks for writing publicly.

By: Penny

Penny — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 03:10:36 +0000

Fuck. That description of Lida being fed is making me crazy.

By: CJ

CJ — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 06:49:34 +0000

I love your description of Stephen’s face; I can almost always envision the women you write about more easily than the men, so this passage made the experience more full.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 01:49:35 +0000

You make a good point, Dan. I think I’ll leave that to the literary writers. *grin*

By: Dan

Dan — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 20:06:54 +0000

This is gorgeous. But — but — I almost wish it had stopped at the first section. Because _that_ was something I’ve never seen before: erotica where somebody(ies) make an advance, have it rejected, take no for an answer and go contentedly on their way. And is sexy even though (because?) nothing happens.

By: Penny Goring

Penny Goring — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 06:15:25 +0000

Gorgeous.

By: mina

mina — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 01:22:50 +0000

dam RG… i just imagined myself there.. as Lida… yum! I hope you are “kitten” *wink*

By: Abby

Abby — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 22:31:36 +0000

Wicked, absolutely wickedly delicious. I’m loving this piece.

By: seeker

seeker — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 22:15:08 +0000

“lined with decades of looking into bright horizons” – Instantly unfurled with grandeur in my mind, as few metaphors can. I am filled with the rush of a treasure hunter upon finding the desired.

By: Ken MIller

Ken MIller — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 15:35:43 +0000

Wicked lady such a delightfully wicked lady