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This was a wonderful read. I thoroughly enjoyed every sentence, and the characters are intriguing. You are so adept at getting into the minds of both character and reader, it is quite a talent.
So freaking sexy. You blow my mind.
Wow! Hot and humorous; a very enjoyable read.
Wow Wow Wow.
Wow. This story was amazing. It was so well done with so much focus on the characters and plot, that I paid rapt attention as I read, more interested in the story than the sex—though they are of course inextricably bound.
The erotic language you use is perfectly balanced—graphic enough to stimulate the imagination but not blatantly pornographic. It takes real skill to do that.
Obviously I enjoyed the story. The slow (year-long!) progression of their sexual encounters is damn sexy. Apart from the use of “they’re” instead of “their” in paragraph 5, I think the story is perfect. Keep up the great work; I look forward to the next one.
♥ Ash
Ack! Thank you for finding the typo!
A nice way to toy with our transition to the new year. Hope you check in with these characters again.
RG,
A great story, really enjoyable. I have been looking for another course of the Museum Piece…
Thankyou,
-TFP
Then I shall have to give you one!
Excellent – you are a wonderful writer.
My favourite though, is still
“The Spy Who Loved His Wife”
Thanks for writing it on black on white.
Bob C
That was perfectly timed.
Ha! sounds like a fun game to play at work… Naughty girl, RG! Keep up the good work
Ha! I think that’s my favourite thing you’ve written.
What a fun, beautifully crafted gift for the new year! Thanks again, Rgrl!
Such hunger & fun. Another amazingly well written piece as always.
Beautiful.
Just amazing! You sure do know what is meant to happen between a man and a woman but better than that, you know so well how to describe it!
Loved this…I will read on now about ‘her turn’.
Thanks for your wonderful distractions…
Please, please don’t tease us and please continue this story! I have returned to read this three times!!
YES!! PLEASE finish this story! It’s indescribably hot! And no-one likes a tease…
No! Don’t finish the story – I think it’s perfect left there for us to imagine what the New Year brings for these two people.
Every time I get on the subway, I think of this post now. It’s made for much more…. interesting…. commute thoughts.
What a great little cock teaser you are..! Wonderful bit of fantasy and whimsy. Just the sort of thing we could only dream about in crowded lifts.
Loved the way you never touched ona single other person. They were in world of their /our own.
You are in a class all your own, RG — and that’s all there is to it!