Comments on: Dark Garden

By: Heloise

Heloise — Fri, 18 Dec 2009 00:00:44 +0000

You know what rmpled said? I agree. At first I was a little hesitant to read this story because it reminded me of memories I buried a long time ago, but now that I have read it, it truly is a beautiful story. The little bundle of nervousness and, I admit, a little bit of fear trembling in my stomach might have actually added to the eroticism and power of this story.

By: Jess

Jess — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 08:45:52 +0000

Wow.

I read this story and bookmarked this website straight after.

Yum. Well done.

By: Elli Rouva

Elli Rouva — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 03:53:30 +0000

This was a fantastic read. Very dark—- very deep. I loved it.

By: rmpled

rmpled — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 01:54:14 +0000

It is most certainly not the flow of the words that caused me to have to start it twice. It was the fact that she was back at his doorstep. And I knew that if I kept reading it meant that she would go through the door. And if she had spent time talking herself out of going, in fact over the course of a month she might have spent a LOT of time talking herself out of going…but there she was. I had a moment where I had to stop and take a breath before I let myself walk through that door with her. If that makes any sense…

By: marianne

marianne — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 18:55:32 +0000

Beautifully written, and so evocative. We don’t have to have lived an identical situation to understand that dark need for release, and yes, the calm that follows.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 13:56:13 +0000

rmpled,
Oh, dear. If it took you two tries to read the first paragraph, that is not good! I’ll have another look at it and see what is making it awkward to read.

Hugs and thanks for commenting.

By: rmpled

rmpled — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 13:32:52 +0000

Took two tries to read the first paragraph. Once upon a time, this was my world. I thought I had forgotten all about it. Amazing writing to take me back to a place that I didn’t even want to go to….and enjoy it.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 11:17:15 +0000

My lack of patience with imbeciles is legendary. And the fact that you have left yet another comment and you did respond is proof that indeed you do condescend. It also suggests that you're as dumb as a brick. I also see you're back with yet another fake email address and another fake IP address (by the way, you spelled your own pseudonym wrong on your fake email address). So you're not just an imbecile, you are a cowardly, dishonourable imbecile, who doesn't even have enough strength of conviction about your opinions to wage your battles without hiding behind anonymizers. You're no better than a person who hits and runs on highway. Despicable. Livingston, you are a cowardly, cretinous, uneducated, unsophisticated illiterate who really needs to get a life, and stay the fuck off my site. Next time you comment, I will not give you a pixel of space. I'll click the little 'delete' button and flush your pathetic ass into the digital abyss.

By: Amelia

Amelia — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 05:58:42 +0000

Beautiful, again. I love the garden metaphor, and the images and feelings you evoke. Keep it up, and ignore the likes of Livingston. You’re doing us all a favor and giving us such beauty for free. He has no right whatsoever to criticize you.

By: Remittance Girl

Remittance Girl — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 01:22:47 +0000

And to the very sick individual who keeps leaving messages on my blog using my own email address, it is a symptom of your pathology that you keep using my identity to leave comments. I deleted them all. You require psychiatric help.