Online Erotic Fiction

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  1. Teju
    November 26, 2017 at 6:00 am

    Hi RG,

    I started reading erotica with your work, and I’ve read quite a bit now – from many websites, books and blogs.
    But, I keep returning to your work… because your writing tugs on my emotions at a deeper level. Your stories have a such a tender and beautiful aftertaste (?) to them…

    Thank you!

    • michael muscarello
      March 28, 2019 at 7:36 am

      Do you do custom stories

  2. Kyle
    December 5, 2017 at 9:50 am

    Very poetic. Please continue writing 🙂

  3. Ankhe
    January 9, 2018 at 8:36 pm

    I really want to thank you for writing all of these because gosh how long had I been searching for this.
    I’m a french speaker even if fluent in english but nor in french could I find something like that.
    In the librairies, I could only find naive romance stories and on the internet deceiving plain ones. I was searching for erotism and erosion and could only find adolescent or tragic romance or porn, and so whatever the language.
    So, again, thank you for your work. I just found it and I think I could spend the day reading it all and then have conversation with my self about it haha.
    I’ve read two of your non-consensual stories this far and loved the way you managed it. Most people hide the disturbing feelings it bring and where it finds it foundation by putting some cliché scenes with rape/bdsm and just concentrating on sex. It seemed to me as though even if you don’t approuve or justify the act, you showcase the things that makes the reader uncomfortable. I think for a lot of people that non-consent turn on, these disturbing feelings and thought are what turn us on, not the straps and leathers or some ”stop it” plain talk.
    You have such a way of showcasing feelings and thoughts, in all the types of stories you write, this is exactly what I – and probably a lot of people – need, cause it’s not the simple view of sex that arouse us.
    So thank you again, for your work and for sharing it cost-free, I’ll continue following it and comment, hope I wasn’t too long and that it wasn’t too much of a bother to read.

  4. Michael
    January 18, 2018 at 3:03 am

    You need not post this comment. Your prose is delightful to read. You paint a vivid picture, put the reader in the moment, and move your story without wasting words. As an American, I would add a hyphen here and there, and we use “led” as the past tense of “lead.” Maybe a proofreader would help, but you are good at what you do. Keep up the spinning of these delightful and sexy yarns.

    • January 28, 2018 at 10:09 pm

      A proofreader would definitely help. Are you volunteering?

      • TheMelon
        May 19, 2018 at 5:16 am

        I can proofread if you’re still looking for one

      • David Bailey
        August 7, 2018 at 6:32 am

        Hi, I just spent the day – yes, entire day reading your deliciously fresh approach to erotic writing. You seem equally skilled in all forms of pleasure & romance.
        yes, I first one would love to edit your work. I will send you my qualifications if you’d like – no charge, of course, just the opportunity to read your prose before anyone else would be payment enough.

  5. Sharan Krystyniak
    January 18, 2018 at 7:19 am

    Please don’t stop posting your writing. It reminds me of who I once was, long ago. I’m 65 now, settled. But there was a time, long ago.
    You are a beautiful writer. Thank you.

  6. January 21, 2018 at 11:11 am

    I’ve been looking for good erotica reads and after reading some of your writings, I am very impress and love your work! Your work is not as cliques as other works. I enjoy reading them and hope that you would continue writing them. Thank you for your hard work!

  7. Jackie
    February 3, 2018 at 3:32 am

    I stumbled upon your work today. It is pure art. Please don’t ever stop writing.

  8. Alsi
    February 3, 2018 at 3:30 pm

    Great stories! Thanks so much for sharing them.

  9. Sassy
    February 10, 2018 at 4:16 am

    Your words create a world that sets the reader as protagonist, feeling the sultry in both darkness and light. As someone who’s mind gets in my way even in bed at night, your stories seduce me into a better state of being, where my body takes over. My partner and I both thank you heartily for that.

  10. Zane
    March 17, 2018 at 4:43 pm

    There is something beautiful and unique about your writing that I simply can not stray from. You capture the subjects in their purest amd most raw formand it’s exquisite.

  11. Lance
    April 2, 2018 at 11:36 am

    It would be nice if you put your sendings into categories. You could require that the sendders identify the submissions by category, plus put a two-sentence summary.


    • April 4, 2018 at 12:56 pm

      Lance, you are under no obligation to read my work, but I do treat readers as grown-ups who have the capacity to stop reading something that disturbs them.

  12. Lance
    April 2, 2018 at 11:42 am

    If you are comfortable with including stories about cutting, then you should stop going on line. At some point, persons with some degree of social perception should know where to draw the line. Your judgement as to where that line goes is broken. It is not a matter of freedom of expression; it is a matter of encouraging psociopaths.

    • April 4, 2018 at 12:55 pm

      “If you are comfortable with including stories about cutting, then you should stop going on line.”

      I would like to refer you to my manifesto page. This is fiction, not a lifestyle guide. There is a huge amount of fiction that focuses on eroticism in all sorts of areas that go beyond what is normative or socially acceptable. Should we ban it all? Fiction about serial killers, fiction about mass murders, fiction about all sorts of violence. Should we ban it all because we wouldn’t want those things happening in reality?

  13. zany
    April 4, 2018 at 5:57 am

    Am talking about “The perfect foreigner” So he didn’t fuck her? I am sorta confused, he saves his cock for his wife yet he is so close with her. But they didn’t fuck each other right? Sorry it’s my first time on this site a little bit of insight will be great help.

    • April 4, 2018 at 12:52 pm

      Right. Please don’t apologise. The story made you think, and try to puzzle it out. That’s what it was intended to do.

  14. Tom Morrow
    April 29, 2018 at 7:02 pm

    Have been reading several of your stories and last night found “Blindness”, which got me to thinking of a different type of story. Picture one of those heart necklaces made of two halves, each intended to be worn by different people. Now imagine a story where the point of view alternates between her perspective and his; combined, the two experiences make up the whole. It could be done as a collaboration, but I can tell you have the skill to write both halves, if you felt inclined. Though it should be done with different characters, the shared theme is the strap on.

    “HE: I love her and I’m sure she loves me- and in a way, that’s the problem. Can you see how that could be? Because it means I don’t want to lose her. We’ve been together several years and I can’t imagine life without her. But let me back up, so to speak, and explain something.

    At a quiet little New Year’s get-together, another couple was bantering while the rest of watched the show. At one point, the woman made a reference to using a strap on on him and he had a low-level meltdown. Nothing uncomfortable, but I could tell his “no how, no way” was heartfelt, to say the least. And my reaction was the same- like, “uh, no thank you”. But in the following weeks I couldn’t get the idea out of my head. I found myself going from merely thinking of it in the abstract to feeling a little intrigued.

    I don’t know if I’d actually like it, but I’d like to experiment and find out. Our sex life has been satisfactory for both of us (yes, I ask her regularly. I’m not stupid!) But it’s also gotten a little predictable. It’s good to add some spice, some variety– but this might be going overboard. Now do you see my problem? I’d like to bring this idea up, but I’m also terrified. Aside from my own doubts- such as what this might say about my manliness- I worry about her reaction.

    I have no problem with gay people, but I also know that I’m just not wired that way. No, the truth is nine times out of ten I prefer to dominate our sexual adventures. I hold her wrists overhead as we do it, or tug her hair or flip her from one position to another and she loves all this. But sometimes… SOMETIMES… I’d like her to take charge. And now I know I want her to fuck my ass with a strap on. I picture her grinding on me as she strokes my cock and I get SO turned on. Then I imagine telling her about my fantasy– and picture her recoiling in shock, her beautiful face scrunched up in disgust. I want what I want, but at the same time, I never want her to look at me like that. So I keep this to myself.

    SHE: …… “

  15. Meg
    May 18, 2018 at 11:19 pm

    Sorry to be so ill-informed, but could you you explain the acronyms please?

  16. sachiko
    June 23, 2018 at 1:33 pm

    I am a 70 year young woman who’s been married for 33 years to someone with prostrate cancer for the past 25 years. I haven’t been made love by a man in so long I wonder if I ever will again. I wonder if there’s something like being a retro virgin?

    Thanks so much for your stories. The keep me sane.

    • June 27, 2018 at 8:17 pm

      Hello Sachiko, you know I think this is an incredibly common problem and everyone stays quiet about it because of not wanting to hurt the other’s feelings, or fear of being seen as a ‘bad wife’. I really hope we will come to see our erotic lives as something other than our sexual lives, and realize that it is mostly mental. Sex is a physical function, but eroticism is emotional, intellectual, cultural… so much more complex. It’s okay to be erotic with yourself. It doesn’t mean you’re ‘lacking’ anything.

  17. Liza
    June 24, 2018 at 3:31 am

    You build such deep characters in such short stories. Keep nurturing your talent. And keep the rest of us pleasured.

  18. David Lee Andrew
    July 1, 2018 at 10:04 am

    I am male, 66, married 43 years & sexually impotent after cancer surgery, yet… it’s the first time I’ve read one of your stories. Thank you for the frankness of it. The female experience is always a mystery & for me a fantasy. We (males) know the responses can’t be so very different from our own, but they are different. The fascination is how, why, can I be a better lover? ‘Though it’s over for me, your work is enlightening & a relief. I am still curious, even hopeful (!).
    …& you write well. D

  19. Raam
    July 9, 2018 at 2:00 am

    Love your work and it fills some void most of us fail to acknowledge.

  20. Lilly
    August 10, 2018 at 5:40 pm

    Love your stories!

  21. George
    August 15, 2018 at 1:53 am

    Favourite so far is Bequeathed, although I anticipated the ending.
    Interesting characters in many of the stories and am turned on regardless of your intent

  22. Sammy
    September 15, 2018 at 6:52 am

    I visit your site time and time again. Absolutely love your style of writing and the variety of characters and plots. You are incredible at small descriptions that make a huge difference to the reading experience. I get completely immersed in your stories and I’m always a bit disappointed when they are over, however, because they’re short, they make for perfect reading before bed. Have you got any published work out there? I’d love to be able to buy some and support you.

  23. Nour
    September 20, 2018 at 4:08 am

    Your stories are awesome! ❤️Best I’ve ever seen. Please never stop writing

  24. Linda
    September 23, 2018 at 2:22 pm

    I’m new to erotic fiction. When I read your work, a film plays in my mind. Great work! Thank you!

    I would love to read more m/f…where neither dominates…some may find it tame, but you have the skill to make it sizzle.

  25. Anonymous
    November 8, 2018 at 1:28 pm

    The realism of your work is amazing, I particularly appreciate the work you put into suspense and elements of surprise. I’ve found all too often erotica is formulaic, and because of that it doesn’t feel real. This is a breath of fresh air, you are truly talented!

  26. John
    November 13, 2018 at 5:36 pm

    I have tried to write erotica so I know it’s not easy. Long experience writing in other fields says that I do have some ability but I have yet to transfer that skill to my satisfaction (pardon the pun) to erotic stories. You, on the other hand, seem to have mastered the art and I have enjoyed several of your stories so far.

  27. Anonymous
    January 3, 2019 at 8:23 am

    I’ve been trying to write some intimate scenes for the first story I’m writing, but wasn’t that successful in developing proper emotion or drama out of it. your stories ignited my imagination so far it’s blazing both personal life with passion and my writing. Keep writing.

    • February 1, 2019 at 2:58 pm

      When I embarked on writing sex scenes, I followed Hemingway’s advice – write the truest thing you know. That has stood me in good stead.

  28. Renni
    April 21, 2019 at 2:10 pm

    I love this, I’ve been reading for a few years. I always look if anything new has posted.

    • April 21, 2019 at 4:17 pm

      I’m so sorry I have nothing new to post. I just…. don’t. Sorry.

  29. The Ugandan
    April 22, 2019 at 1:57 am

    I find your stories very interesting. I see myself as a writer but when I put things down they do not appeal to me at all. And that affects my motivation. Do you have any advie for me. I want to get serious with this once and for all. Thank you… For the inspiration and all the stories

  30. George
    July 24, 2019 at 8:53 am

    Some good stuff there. Light and easy to read

  31. L Wilson
    July 25, 2019 at 5:42 pm

    I wonder if you have no more to say here This genre. Perhaps you could write in a different genre. To write the ‘truest thing you know’ in another genre might be possible if you did intensive research. I read of another author who learned what he needed from considerable research. That was Elmore Leonard. IMHO u have exceptional writing skill.

    • July 25, 2019 at 6:17 pm

      You could be right. Honestly, I think it’s not a question of genre, but more a grave insecurity about the very concept of ‘fiction’ in this current era. I have lost my trust in readers’ ability to understand that fiction is not a blueprint for reality.

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