Grown-up Games

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  1. E
    August 6, 2017 at 7:48 pm


  2. Em
    August 14, 2017 at 10:12 am

    Well worth the wait all the way to the end!

  3. Cait
    August 24, 2017 at 11:23 am

    Good Lord, woman. This was too good…

  4. Cj
    September 8, 2017 at 3:11 pm

    I’m saddened that I’m nearly done reading this section of your site. Your work is incredible. You bring me into these worlds that I never want to leave unless I’m heading into another.


  5. Jacki
    September 10, 2017 at 12:10 am

    I want more!!!!

  6. A_
    September 12, 2017 at 11:47 am

    This is so gloriously written… The kitchen scene was exactly what I wanted without even realizing.

  7. cj
    September 15, 2017 at 11:38 am

    I really enjoyed this, would love another installment though!

  8. kerryn rose
    September 21, 2017 at 2:10 pm

    Beautiful story, so well written.
    I didn’t know which character to identify with most …

    Thank you!


  9. Stan
    September 24, 2017 at 11:01 pm

    You are an excellent writter . I enjoyed your work immensely.

  10. D
    September 25, 2017 at 8:11 pm

    …to be continued and a second coming I hope!

  11. Char
    October 2, 2017 at 10:26 am

    This is exactly what I was looking for. Thank you. Your writing is 1 in a million.

  12. khada
    October 4, 2017 at 8:20 am

    There are times when I read you that I find myself holding my breath. The anticipation is magic. Your words sink into me as if they have as if they have come home- as if there is no other way to tell the story. Thank you

  13. GN
    October 4, 2017 at 10:03 am

    O.M.G! Can I have his address! He can treat me like that any day of the week.
    This was so deliciously written, I forgot I was actually reading until it ended. I saw every scene as if I was there.

  14. Felene Pollard
    October 12, 2017 at 8:26 pm

    The kitchen scene was amazing – perfection, thank you !

  15. Gjh
    October 12, 2017 at 11:52 pm

    So freaking amazing you are a wonderful writer

  16. Ladytiger
    October 13, 2017 at 2:30 am

    Yes more of stories like this. Love it so much going to have to share with my hubby for hot ideas. This is so well written

  17. SMH
    October 13, 2017 at 4:49 am

    Love this piece and would like more spanking fiction please.
    The intensity expressed encapsulates the whole play perfectly.

    More please…

  18. Rane
    November 8, 2017 at 4:01 am

    I love how you are able to build a feeling in relatively few words – this is true for all of your stories. Bravo – keep up the good work.

  19. Ron
    January 7, 2018 at 3:30 am


  20. Peer Fram
    January 7, 2018 at 9:19 pm

    You grab your readers’ somethings and don’t let go. Never mind the girl, or the teacher for that matter, this entrapped me from the beginning. Thanks very much for creating it.

  21. Becca
    January 12, 2018 at 8:01 am

    Stunning.. every word!

  22. Cee
    January 22, 2018 at 7:08 am

    It felt like I was there till it ended! Amazing.

  23. Julie Linden
    February 9, 2018 at 4:02 am

    You are a gifted artist. Your words are color that paint a picture as clear as a photo. Beautiful. You presented characters that were almost instantly people that I cared about

  24. Karen
    March 31, 2018 at 3:24 pm

    Wonderfully written. I really enjoyed this.

  25. K
    June 18, 2018 at 1:01 am


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