Jude – 2

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  1. TFP
    June 19, 2014 at 6:24 pm

    More please.

  2. June 19, 2014 at 9:19 pm

    I like these two, a lot. Looking forward to Jude’s party.

  3. Six
    June 28, 2014 at 5:24 pm

    Can’t wait for part 3!

  4. Dein
    August 19, 2014 at 2:27 pm

    What happened to part 3? Please, please. I really want to find out what happens at the dinner party

    • Erin
      October 22, 2018 at 2:04 am

      Yeah I’d like a part 3 as well. Ending it like that makes me wonder so many things like what is going to happen next. I’m on the edge of my seat. Please more

  5. Sey
    August 31, 2014 at 5:45 am

    ” I should have known someone like Jude would always have someone dancing attendance.” Favourite line 🙂

    • Mary
      May 22, 2017 at 10:01 am

      Mine was “She had a smile like a solar flare.” Beautiful! Tasty, captivating storytelling.

    • May 18, 2018 at 1:56 pm

      Strangely the ones that you know will have a partner don’t realise you will know so they feel required to tell you. Apparently talking to you without telling you is somehow dangerous.

  6. Sarah
    February 5, 2015 at 7:09 am

    Well written. I found it very interesting.

  7. Fee
    March 13, 2015 at 8:09 pm

    Waiting with bated breath for the next instalment

  8. kc
    May 25, 2015 at 7:45 pm

    ….and then? Please!

  9. Stephanie
    June 10, 2015 at 5:45 pm

    Another reader who wants to know what happens next. More, please.

  10. JAA
    June 14, 2015 at 8:13 pm

    Ahhh….shades of….Emmanuelle.

  11. JAA
    June 14, 2015 at 8:18 pm

    The exotic elements, the openness to sexual range, the heat, the boredom of a distant diplomatic post, the imagery is so fluid, so accurate, so cinematic. And the old film Emmanuelle rose right up in a flash!

  12. Brenda
    August 16, 2015 at 12:17 am

    Like to read the rest of the story to see how it ends

  13. debi
    September 7, 2015 at 11:18 am

    W h a t ??? More more more !!!

  14. O S
    October 5, 2015 at 2:40 pm

    I just happened to stumble upon this and think it’s really well written. The first part left me itching for more, second left me feeling like I was stepped on, can’t wait for more of this abuse on my senses and imagination. Definitely going to read more.

  15. KH
    November 27, 2015 at 4:39 am

    I’m enjoying your story… more please!

  16. Tiffany
    February 2, 2016 at 9:04 am

    Waiting for more!! Loved it.

  17. John
    February 7, 2016 at 1:50 pm

    Great i need more

  18. Chiny
    February 16, 2016 at 4:07 am

    Oh leave me wanting more. Hope it’s not the end.

  19. Keen
    April 26, 2016 at 12:32 pm

    great read. left me wanting more.

  20. Samantha
    May 4, 2016 at 12:25 pm

    Completely taken with these 2. I want more!

  21. Konii
    June 12, 2016 at 4:01 pm

    I want to go to the party too.

  22. Southern Reader
    June 15, 2016 at 6:57 pm

    Very impressed by your writing. As a reader, you really feel for the characters and are able to imagine how you would feel if you were in their position.

  23. Nescafe Americano
    August 22, 2016 at 8:41 am

    That’s a mighty fine story getting off the ground if I ever did see one!

    Hoping for more down the line?

  24. Daniel
    October 18, 2016 at 4:11 am

    Dopeness.

  25. Patti
    November 6, 2016 at 6:46 am

    I like that this is the end to the story, unless you are righting more. I like the ambiguous endings that make you wonder what could possibly be happening next but never actually having the answer. Great story.

    • Cza
      June 28, 2018 at 2:39 am

      Couldn’t agree more. The mystery is what sets it apart.
      Life is not always a bed of red roses & even if it is; roses have thorns.

  26. Carole Ann
    December 8, 2016 at 10:37 am

    I like…very enticing at grabbing your attention…the anticipation really begins to build…

  27. Dice
    January 13, 2017 at 6:34 am

    Ooh I like this one and I agree, please write more to this story 🙂

  28. emps
    January 21, 2017 at 11:58 am

    It is Emmanuelle, my angel now in heaven.

  29. Catherine Pool
    February 23, 2017 at 11:44 am

    Andanother? More please…

  30. March 4, 2017 at 9:38 am

    Wonderful story, leaves you wanting more. I cannot wait for what is to come. Just one observation. Columbian should be spelled Colombian. The country is spelled with an “o” not an u. I discover this site today and I love it!

    • March 20, 2017 at 8:23 pm

      Thank you so much! of course it’s Colombian with an o (gah!)

  31. Gabriel
    June 12, 2017 at 5:55 am

    Had me hooked and wanting more

  32. Keisha
    August 18, 2017 at 2:42 am

    Omg where is the rest of the story

  33. Annabel
    October 12, 2017 at 5:41 am

    Very good story, character development etc..please write more!!

  34. Andy
    November 14, 2017 at 7:45 am

    If she wants to be with Jude, she should have taken the diplomat up on the threesome even if she doesn’t want to fuck him.

  35. Justin
    November 25, 2017 at 7:45 am

    This was my first time ever reading something of this nature. I liked it. I could picture myself as the character even though I’m a man. Seeing my wife for the first time. Diving into the details of beauty is a language most don’t understand. This short story uses it flawlessly.

  36. Tom
    February 2, 2018 at 4:53 am

    Made me think of the strikingly gorgeous bald Australian woman I met in at the market in Hoi An.

    • March 20, 2018 at 3:33 am

      She sounds wonderful. Was she an artist? Because I think I might know who that is you met!

  37. Anna
    February 16, 2018 at 12:19 am

    keep writing! excellent!!!

  38. Renee
    April 9, 2018 at 5:25 am

    Talk about a tease… (: First I thought the person was a guy.. but didn’t take long to realize I was wrong.

  39. Margarita
    May 19, 2018 at 8:09 am

    I loved it. Was definitely ready to read more…

  40. Joe
    May 21, 2018 at 2:36 pm

    Cool

  41. Fixx
    May 22, 2018 at 5:07 pm

    I have just found your writing through a friends recommendation.

    Is there a part three to Jude? Please?

    Looking forward to reading more!

  42. Elizabeth Horton
    June 2, 2018 at 7:02 am

    Very nice. Must know what happens next

  43. Markle
    June 28, 2018 at 1:50 am

    very impressed. what’s next?

  44. Becs Crockett
    June 30, 2018 at 3:16 pm

    I love this …entranced , im enjoying the tension and the real sense of longing for Jude. I remember these familiar feelings during a crush on a woman i had , the desire to to something impulse and unacceptable . More please @

  45. Latasha
    September 4, 2018 at 11:18 am

    I’m looking forward to what happens at Jude’s party. I wonder if Jude will be her conquest. I felt attracted to Jude myself and I’m a straight woman. Well done.

  46. Craig
    September 25, 2018 at 10:59 am

    Amazing story love Athena metaphors
    My fav is the laugh like spun sugar….the whole piece is off the chizzy! Where do I sign up???

  47. Maggie
    October 15, 2018 at 12:35 am

    Wow! Just wow! Everything you write has a way of making me feel the surroundings and the characters! Absolutely amazing, hope there’s a part 3, and if not, don’t stress about it! You’re awesome, keep up the good work

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