Jude – 2

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  1. TFP
    June 19, 2014 at 6:24 pm

    More please.

  2. June 19, 2014 at 9:19 pm

    I like these two, a lot. Looking forward to Jude’s party.

  3. Six
    June 28, 2014 at 5:24 pm

    Can’t wait for part 3!

  4. Dein
    August 19, 2014 at 2:27 pm

    What happened to part 3? Please, please. I really want to find out what happens at the dinner party

  5. Sey
    August 31, 2014 at 5:45 am

    ” I should have known someone like Jude would always have someone dancing attendance.” Favourite line 🙂

    • Mary
      May 22, 2017 at 10:01 am

      Mine was “She had a smile like a solar flare.” Beautiful! Tasty, captivating storytelling.

    • May 18, 2018 at 1:56 pm

      Strangely the ones that you know will have a partner don’t realise you will know so they feel required to tell you. Apparently talking to you without telling you is somehow dangerous.

  6. Sarah
    February 5, 2015 at 7:09 am

    Well written. I found it very interesting.

  7. Fee
    March 13, 2015 at 8:09 pm

    Waiting with bated breath for the next instalment

  8. kc
    May 25, 2015 at 7:45 pm

    ….and then? Please!

  9. Stephanie
    June 10, 2015 at 5:45 pm

    Another reader who wants to know what happens next. More, please.

  10. JAA
    June 14, 2015 at 8:13 pm

    Ahhh….shades of….Emmanuelle.

  11. JAA
    June 14, 2015 at 8:18 pm

    The exotic elements, the openness to sexual range, the heat, the boredom of a distant diplomatic post, the imagery is so fluid, so accurate, so cinematic. And the old film Emmanuelle rose right up in a flash!

  12. Brenda
    August 16, 2015 at 12:17 am

    Like to read the rest of the story to see how it ends

  13. debi
    September 7, 2015 at 11:18 am

    W h a t ??? More more more !!!

  14. O S
    October 5, 2015 at 2:40 pm

    I just happened to stumble upon this and think it’s really well written. The first part left me itching for more, second left me feeling like I was stepped on, can’t wait for more of this abuse on my senses and imagination. Definitely going to read more.

  15. KH
    November 27, 2015 at 4:39 am

    I’m enjoying your story… more please!

  16. Tiffany
    February 2, 2016 at 9:04 am

    Waiting for more!! Loved it.

  17. John
    February 7, 2016 at 1:50 pm

    Great i need more

  18. Chiny
    February 16, 2016 at 4:07 am

    Oh leave me wanting more. Hope it’s not the end.

  19. Keen
    April 26, 2016 at 12:32 pm

    great read. left me wanting more.

  20. Samantha
    May 4, 2016 at 12:25 pm

    Completely taken with these 2. I want more!

  21. Konii
    June 12, 2016 at 4:01 pm

    I want to go to the party too.

  22. Southern Reader
    June 15, 2016 at 6:57 pm

    Very impressed by your writing. As a reader, you really feel for the characters and are able to imagine how you would feel if you were in their position.

  23. Nescafe Americano
    August 22, 2016 at 8:41 am

    That’s a mighty fine story getting off the ground if I ever did see one!

    Hoping for more down the line?

  24. Daniel
    October 18, 2016 at 4:11 am

    Dopeness.

  25. Patti
    November 6, 2016 at 6:46 am

    I like that this is the end to the story, unless you are righting more. I like the ambiguous endings that make you wonder what could possibly be happening next but never actually having the answer. Great story.

    • Cza
      June 28, 2018 at 2:39 am

      Couldn’t agree more. The mystery is what sets it apart.
      Life is not always a bed of red roses & even if it is; roses have thorns.

  26. Carole Ann
    December 8, 2016 at 10:37 am

    I like…very enticing at grabbing your attention…the anticipation really begins to build…

  27. Dice
    January 13, 2017 at 6:34 am

    Ooh I like this one and I agree, please write more to this story 🙂

  28. emps
    January 21, 2017 at 11:58 am

    It is Emmanuelle, my angel now in heaven.

  29. Catherine Pool
    February 23, 2017 at 11:44 am

    Andanother? More please…

  30. March 4, 2017 at 9:38 am

    Wonderful story, leaves you wanting more. I cannot wait for what is to come. Just one observation. Columbian should be spelled Colombian. The country is spelled with an “o” not an u. I discover this site today and I love it!

    • March 20, 2017 at 8:23 pm

      Thank you so much! of course it’s Colombian with an o (gah!)

  31. Gabriel
    June 12, 2017 at 5:55 am

    Had me hooked and wanting more

  32. Keisha
    August 18, 2017 at 2:42 am

    Omg where is the rest of the story

  33. Annabel
    October 12, 2017 at 5:41 am

    Very good story, character development etc..please write more!!

  34. Andy
    November 14, 2017 at 7:45 am

    If she wants to be with Jude, she should have taken the diplomat up on the threesome even if she doesn’t want to fuck him.

  35. Justin
    November 25, 2017 at 7:45 am

    This was my first time ever reading something of this nature. I liked it. I could picture myself as the character even though I’m a man. Seeing my wife for the first time. Diving into the details of beauty is a language most don’t understand. This short story uses it flawlessly.

  36. Tom
    February 2, 2018 at 4:53 am

    Made me think of the strikingly gorgeous bald Australian woman I met in at the market in Hoi An.

    • March 20, 2018 at 3:33 am

      She sounds wonderful. Was she an artist? Because I think I might know who that is you met!

  37. Anna
    February 16, 2018 at 12:19 am

    keep writing! excellent!!!

  38. Renee
    April 9, 2018 at 5:25 am

    Talk about a tease… (: First I thought the person was a guy.. but didn’t take long to realize I was wrong.

  39. Margarita
    May 19, 2018 at 8:09 am

    I loved it. Was definitely ready to read more…

  40. Joe
    May 21, 2018 at 2:36 pm

    Cool

  41. Fixx
    May 22, 2018 at 5:07 pm

    I have just found your writing through a friends recommendation.

    Is there a part three to Jude? Please?

    Looking forward to reading more!

  42. Elizabeth Horton
    June 2, 2018 at 7:02 am

    Very nice. Must know what happens next

  43. Markle
    June 28, 2018 at 1:50 am

    very impressed. what’s next?

  44. Becs Crockett
    June 30, 2018 at 3:16 pm

    I love this …entranced , im enjoying the tension and the real sense of longing for Jude. I remember these familiar feelings during a crush on a woman i had , the desire to to something impulse and unacceptable . More please @

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