35 comments for “Objects of Pleasure

  1. orange rose
    March 17, 2014 at 4:38 am

    Beautiful

    • peter
      March 18, 2014 at 8:43 pm

      just read this on way to work and very good, hope you publish and make lots of people happy and you make lots of money, well done peter from, York.

  2. Tara
    June 8, 2014 at 3:11 am

    I love how you weave your story. I love that their relationship stagnates and is re-kindled. I love the honesty of your writing. Thank you.

  3. Anastaria
    June 28, 2014 at 6:46 pm

    My god! This story was so stunning, you would think you experienced the things you write. I always wanted to be a writer and I’ve never had a guide. I’m very secretive about my writings but if even I look for an example it is you my dear! I just got done with my husband before I read this and already I’m full of emotion! What should be dry is not and what should be confidant and calloused is more rigid and vulnerable. My only fear is that I will read them and have none left to read. I hope with all of my heart that you have a man to make you feel the pleasure you produce. Please email me, since you have my email via these requirements, I would love to have a conversation with you!

  4. Emily
    July 18, 2014 at 9:46 pm

    This piece was beautiful and captivating. Definitely my favorite that I’ve read so far. I adored the element of love between a husband and wife… It makes everything much more realistic and I could relate easily back to my love and me. Watching porn and reading your stories both get me off, but your writing offers so so so much more … I feel emotionally connected to your characters, the story. You really make me feel as if I was there! I also love the touches of humor you sprinkle throughout your pieces. And I also love love love how culturally accurate you are when you write stories set in different countries, such as this one. Needless to say I will be extremely upset when I finally read everything on your site!! You’re extremely talented. Thank you so much for sharing your work on the internet for people like me to read.

  5. Lil
    July 24, 2014 at 12:44 am

    Wow this is surprisingly good writing. It’s like something i would read on the hairpin.com ( not an erotica website, just have a lot of good writing on fun topics). It’s not …um… masturbtating material because it’s so good. There’s a true story and characters and plot twist. Thanks for sharing it for free!

  6. Bud
    August 30, 2014 at 5:34 am

    Thanks and may you be blessed with all you dream of!

  7. Martha
    September 29, 2014 at 5:05 pm

    Very well written story that pulls you in and keeps you there. Just found your website and this was the first story I’ve read. I will be reading more. Thank you for posting them for free!

  8. happy
    October 13, 2014 at 11:07 am

    I got teary eyed reading this because I was so happy for the characters. Loved it!

  9. Kerahdah
    October 25, 2014 at 3:55 am

    The ending was perfect! I also appreciated the subtle humour implied throughout.

  10. DKC
    April 13, 2015 at 1:28 am

    Fascinating story. For me it was much more a well written psychological and cultural study than erotica. I enjoyed it. And, really, very Japanese. Can’t imagine it working in any other setting.

  11. Aiona
    October 28, 2015 at 2:42 am

    What a sweet story of a truly amazing couple. Makes me wish my husband were in a different profession…. I only found one typo. “β€œKaori, my dear, will you do me a flavor?” I suspect you meant “favor.” But the Freudian slip is a nice one.

    • October 30, 2015 at 11:18 am

      Oh, thanks so much for spotting the typo! Glad you liked it. And yes, there’s a parapraxis if there ever was one!

  12. larry puchalsky
    December 14, 2015 at 12:01 pm

    this is the first time I have visited the site and this was the first selection. the story built up to a very satisfying ending of realization and reconciliation. I loved the last sentence as an ending. I look forward to more enjoyable tales.

  13. Liza
    December 27, 2015 at 11:59 am

    I don’t know what i was expecting, but you surprise me at every turn. Beautifully woven stories with living, breathing characters, and from all over the world and all space and time! Not many erotica writers are willing to venture far from their cozy nests of New York Apartments or Rustic Winter Lodges. You have the spectacular ability to do just that, and do it so flawlessly that it seems you were born for it ( we all know you were ).

  14. Lala
    January 22, 2016 at 12:00 am

    …..It was the first story i read on your website….and wow…. I have read all the comments and it seems everyone enjoyed the story as much as i did…. thank you for allowing me to realise erotica doesn’t have to stray far from the magic of english and its stories….thank you

  15. Adina
    February 20, 2016 at 2:19 pm

    This story is incredibly beautiful and intimate.

  16. Lottie
    February 28, 2016 at 4:27 pm

    Beautiful story, this is the second time I’ve read it, and it was just as good as the first time. I’d love some of this intimacy in my own life

  17. Somi
    March 7, 2016 at 8:55 pm

    Such a beautiful piece of literature. Thank you

  18. sarah collis
    April 12, 2016 at 6:40 am

    Beautiful writing, loved it. Thank you

  19. Christine
    May 7, 2016 at 8:24 pm

    I’ve read your stories off and on for years, but this remains one of my favorites.

  20. Rose
    May 15, 2016 at 2:11 pm

    I love how sexy and genuine this is. The cadence of the piece makes it sounds like an old story. Beautiful and tender, which you don’t often find in erotica.

    P.S. The title has a typo. Ought to be “objects.” πŸ™‚

  21. ian
    June 17, 2016 at 12:18 am

    very good erotic and literate

  22. moeez
    September 4, 2016 at 4:41 am

    This is beautiful……I swear this is one of the best things I’ve read! I dont read all the time but I’d like to think I know a good piece when I see one. I wish I could write like you! The flow of the story seems so….effortless, I’ve never been in a relationship but for some reason I could empathize with every character! How are you not famous?!

    • September 16, 2016 at 8:29 pm

      Perhaps because I’m not interested in being famous. I’m just very grateful that you have found my stories, and you’ve read one.

  23. Michael Mancroft
    November 1, 2016 at 1:28 pm

    I stumbled across your website whilst searching for something completely different. Sometimes this happens in life when you are searching for something specific and you actually find something unique. Who you are in terms of your writing fascinates me as you write creatively with such confidence. You either have vast life experience or you research your subject matter almost forensically.

    Without hesitation I shall be following your quill henceforth.

  24. Mia
    November 10, 2016 at 3:46 am

    I love your writing. I honestly, with all of my heart, love your writing. When I read a story, it is very unusual for me to like other work from the writer. I have read the majority of your stories and I love them all. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with the world. Please keep up the good work πŸ™‚

  25. Alex
    January 10, 2017 at 10:09 am

    This was very good, I like how you really conveyed the culture. The subtle things, like the head bobbing. And you seem to know an awful lot about the malleability of tortoise shells. Honestly great.

    • January 13, 2017 at 1:36 pm

      Hahahahaha. I did a bit of research on how it was traditionally processed. I can assure you, I would never deprive a cute little tortoise of its shell myself. πŸ˜›

  26. Diana
    January 13, 2017 at 10:35 pm

    Your writing is beautiful. It is erotic and romance telling a story that all men should read. Pay attention to your wife. Appreciate what she does to help you succeed and concentrate on her as much as you do other areas of your life. Beautifully put.

  27. Chris
    January 19, 2017 at 3:05 pm

    At last! A genuinely erotic story, as beautifully crafted as a tortoiseshell dildo! Thank you. X

  28. Denny
    June 6, 2017 at 6:36 am

    WOW! Exquisitely written!

  29. Tanvi
    November 5, 2017 at 5:24 pm

    Wow. What did I just read! This is the first erotica I can actually call one. Like the simplicity of words was commendable. It made me feel aroused in a different kind of way. Hats off to you.

  30. Zellie Roberts
    November 8, 2017 at 6:39 am

    Wonderful. So glad she gets her own!

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