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simply brilliant. A very hot read. *applause*
*That* is why one keeps one’s goddamn promises. Well done!
Very sexy, not something that would usually interest me or turn me on, but I really appreciate this story. It might be the revenge or what might happen after to her.
Thanks.
Hello Starlit,
Indeed! Not my usual fare either! It was written for a friend.
this is my first time on your site…..impressive first read…. eroticism And humor, a noteworthy accomplishment.
sorry, do not have a website so borrowed the one below.
You never disappoint me with where you’ll go next! You did an incredible job of getting into his head. Reggie’s motivation is perfectly just & she realizes it is not without recourse. Putting myself in her place feels powerful. I laugh thinking that if I were to ever consider this, it would be with knowledge that I’d have to immediately enter the Witness Protection Program!
“For all the times the desire turned to salt on my skin.” Ohhh…
Perfect. I would like to try this out myself someday, on a certain someone!…definitely got my blood moving 🙂
What an adventurous mind you have. I’m developing a longing to curl around your feet as you feed me with precious words but first I have the need to shamefully steal your story and bring it to life in the bedroom. It’ll make the evening delightful for the restless boy I have in mind.
Wow
I’d show this to my boyfriend, but it would scare the crap out of him. He knows this has gone through my mind before now. 🙂
Hmmm, just thinking, ‘Reggie’ sounds a bit like ‘RG’…?? 🙂
Needed to change the predator to male!
Sh-h.â€
… [ a version of the story where the aggressor is male and named Andy and the receiver is female] ….
I prop myself up on one elbow, feeling sweaty and stuffy in the suit. “I figure the next time you come to bed after promising to fuck me, you’ll keep your promise. Because you can never tell how you’ll wake up in the morning, otherwise.
(edited by the blog author because my comment function won’t accept this long a comment post)
Thank you Andy, but I do believe that if you were the main character’s lover, there would have been no need for this in the first place. *grin*. Please feel free to post your version on your site. Sorry for the edit. Technology’s a bitch.
As beautifully composed as your protagonist…the only appropriate comment I can think of is ‘okay, RG, I get the message.’ Thanks for such a delicious lesson in etiquette.
Hello Michael,
Frankly, I doubt you’d be the sort of person to require the lesson in the first place. *grin*
::nearly speechless::
NOT what I would usually be into at all, and yet I think this is the story that has turned me on more than any of your other stories. My boyfriend would be scared shitless if I sent it to him, but I still might. Brava.
Hot, but scary too! A cautionary tale for modern times.
Oh my. Yes! I have felt Reggie’s frustrations far too many times to count. If only I had been as creative as Reggie… 🙂
I really, really loved this piece for its delicious power-play. Thanks for sharing!
Loved this story and put a link to it on our blog…Mistress and I do this sort of thing and it does have a tendency to focus an uppity male’s mind.
Oh. My. Loved this story. Your site is going straight to my top sitelist so I’ll definitely come back for more.
Hot hot. Definitely a must read again story.
Great job.
Excellent role reversal where he didn’t seem to like it, but it was still within the bounds of their relationship.
A friend shared this with me. I then read it to my husband. I wish it left him as breathless as it left me.
I think you’re never going to get most men to publicly acknowledge an interest in this. That’s the point of tying them up. It’s not their fault, then. *chuckle*
Awesome! That’s all I can say.
Just had one of my best cums reading your story while stroking my self.
Bravo! You are the most creative writer in this genre. A real gem. You have a knack for describing things in unexpected ways and words that ring True with a capital T. There is a psychological dimension to your work that I truly enjoy. You take people inside characters’ heads in a way that few writers can. Keep up the great work.
Disturbing but captivating
hey this is in no way something i fantasize about or gets me going, but this was sexy! I loved every minute, its like forbidden fruit
Inspiring to say the least. My lover needs to be dominated. No more will “busy” come between us.
Great read, thanks for helping out this couple in the bedroom 😉
Where oh where can I find a woman adventurous like her… Tumultuous reading!!! Thank you
I like pegging, there should be much more of it!
I’m late to this party, but I have to say the 3 stories I’ve read have been excellent.
The only discordant note in this one was dressing her in a suit. I get the symbolism, but it was redundant with the bondage and pegging. For me, the eroticism would have been heightened (not that it could have gotten a lot hotter) had she been nude and still dominant.
Thank you!
Excellent! Time for you to get writing.
Yes loved this wish I could of read this 3 days ago.
Awesome stuff, this is the first one I read while researching pornography written by women and I enjoyed your economy of language. This is very much my scene so I don’t know what your other stories are like (yet) but I think that this is hot!
Excellent; made me wet. Although not to this extreme of BDSM, I dated a girl once who slid her finger into (TOTALLY unexpected, and totally delightful). Loved being a tiny bit sub, and when she made me cum with her mouth, I thought I had drowned her. But she rewarded me with a wet cummy kiss. Keep up the good work; only just found you site.
This was soo good. My boyfriend and I like to experiment with fem-dom and this was lovely.
super story
Thank you for the wonderful story.
I am a little perturbed by the rape; however, he seems to have been ok with it afterward.
Gotta love a fantasy!
You should be a little perturbed. 😀
Amazing story, I really like to be dominated and found this a total turn on… I really wanted to be chained to that bed 🙂
Not what I expected, but I was unable to stop reading. A simple premise well executed. A promise is a promise and not producing is grounds for punishment. I’ve never made a sexual promise I didn’t fulfill, and after this read I never will. Well done
Fascinating and a very arousing read. What I like most about your stories is that you get a hint of the characters’ histories, just enough to fill in the blanks to events that led up to the sexual encounter. Reading this in a femdom context is all the more liberating and satisfying, knowing the power dynamic beforehand and how suddenly it had switched. I do admit, his resistance at first did shock me and was a bit disturbing but somehow that wasn’t a turn off and by the end, it seemed like it wasn’t unwelcome within their relationship.
Thanks for a great story. I don’t need to be tied up. Being on the receiving end of a crop or a strap-on is a gift.