Real Woman

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  1. December 18, 2009 at 3:02 am

    simply brilliant. A very hot read. *applause*

  2. December 18, 2009 at 4:16 am

    *That* is why one keeps one’s goddamn promises. Well done!

  3. starlit
    December 18, 2009 at 5:31 am

    Very sexy, not something that would usually interest me or turn me on, but I really appreciate this story. It might be the revenge or what might happen after to her.

    Thanks.

    • December 18, 2009 at 7:18 am

      Hello Starlit,
      Indeed! Not my usual fare either! It was written for a friend.

      • April 7, 2016 at 1:38 am

        this is my first time on your site…..impressive first read…. eroticism And humor, a noteworthy accomplishment.
        sorry, do not have a website so borrowed the one below.

  4. December 18, 2009 at 5:36 am

    You never disappoint me with where you’ll go next! You did an incredible job of getting into his head. Reggie’s motivation is perfectly just & she realizes it is not without recourse. Putting myself in her place feels powerful. I laugh thinking that if I were to ever consider this, it would be with knowledge that I’d have to immediately enter the Witness Protection Program!

  5. City Different
    December 18, 2009 at 9:52 am

    “For all the times the desire turned to salt on my skin.” Ohhh…

  6. G*
    December 18, 2009 at 10:42 am

    Perfect. I would like to try this out myself someday, on a certain someone!…definitely got my blood moving 🙂

  7. December 18, 2009 at 4:02 pm

    What an adventurous mind you have. I’m developing a longing to curl around your feet as you feed me with precious words but first I have the need to shamefully steal your story and bring it to life in the bedroom. It’ll make the evening delightful for the restless boy I have in mind.

  8. Ken MIller
    December 18, 2009 at 4:44 pm

    Wow

  9. December 18, 2009 at 6:31 pm

    I’d show this to my boyfriend, but it would scare the crap out of him. He knows this has gone through my mind before now. 🙂

  10. G*
    December 19, 2009 at 10:18 am

    Hmmm, just thinking, ‘Reggie’ sounds a bit like ‘RG’…?? 🙂

  11. Andy
    December 20, 2009 at 4:07 pm

    Needed to change the predator to male!

    Sh-h.”

    … [ a version of the story where the aggressor is male and named Andy and the receiver is female] ….

    I prop myself up on one elbow, feeling sweaty and stuffy in the suit. “I figure the next time you come to bed after promising to fuck me, you’ll keep your promise. Because you can never tell how you’ll wake up in the morning, otherwise.

    (edited by the blog author because my comment function won’t accept this long a comment post)

    Thank you Andy, but I do believe that if you were the main character’s lover, there would have been no need for this in the first place. *grin*. Please feel free to post your version on your site. Sorry for the edit. Technology’s a bitch.

  12. Michael
    December 20, 2009 at 11:47 pm

    As beautifully composed as your protagonist…the only appropriate comment I can think of is ‘okay, RG, I get the message.’ Thanks for such a delicious lesson in etiquette.

    • December 21, 2009 at 9:43 am

      Hello Michael,

      Frankly, I doubt you’d be the sort of person to require the lesson in the first place. *grin*

  13. daftgiraffe
    December 22, 2009 at 6:56 am

    ::nearly speechless::

    NOT what I would usually be into at all, and yet I think this is the story that has turned me on more than any of your other stories. My boyfriend would be scared shitless if I sent it to him, but I still might. Brava.

  14. December 22, 2009 at 9:10 pm

    Hot, but scary too! A cautionary tale for modern times.

  15. December 23, 2009 at 5:35 am

    Oh my. Yes! I have felt Reggie’s frustrations far too many times to count. If only I had been as creative as Reggie… 🙂

    I really, really loved this piece for its delicious power-play. Thanks for sharing!

  16. December 28, 2009 at 8:55 am

    Loved this story and put a link to it on our blog…Mistress and I do this sort of thing and it does have a tendency to focus an uppity male’s mind.

  17. Jo
    December 30, 2009 at 1:03 am

    Oh. My. Loved this story. Your site is going straight to my top sitelist so I’ll definitely come back for more.

  18. December 31, 2009 at 3:30 am

    Hot hot. Definitely a must read again story.

    Great job.

  19. blurb
    January 10, 2010 at 7:57 pm

    Excellent role reversal where he didn’t seem to like it, but it was still within the bounds of their relationship.

  20. chrysos
    January 11, 2010 at 9:20 am

    A friend shared this with me. I then read it to my husband. I wish it left him as breathless as it left me.

    • January 11, 2010 at 11:19 am

      I think you’re never going to get most men to publicly acknowledge an interest in this. That’s the point of tying them up. It’s not their fault, then. *chuckle*

  21. Danielle
    February 28, 2010 at 3:45 am

    Awesome! That’s all I can say.

  22. Rod Harris
    February 23, 2014 at 6:17 am

    Just had one of my best cums reading your story while stroking my self.

  23. Six
    March 11, 2014 at 4:25 pm

    Bravo! You are the most creative writer in this genre. A real gem. You have a knack for describing things in unexpected ways and words that ring True with a capital T. There is a psychological dimension to your work that I truly enjoy. You take people inside characters’ heads in a way that few writers can. Keep up the great work.

  24. Tree
    June 14, 2014 at 9:49 am

    Disturbing but captivating

  25. Anastaria
    July 5, 2014 at 6:55 pm

    hey this is in no way something i fantasize about or gets me going, but this was sexy! I loved every minute, its like forbidden fruit

  26. V
    September 6, 2014 at 4:20 am

    Inspiring to say the least. My lover needs to be dominated. No more will “busy” come between us.

  27. Brandy
    November 25, 2014 at 4:56 am

    Great read, thanks for helping out this couple in the bedroom 😉

  28. viv
    February 4, 2015 at 4:33 am

    Where oh where can I find a woman adventurous like her… Tumultuous reading!!! Thank you

  29. Gee
    July 14, 2015 at 7:51 pm

    I like pegging, there should be much more of it!

  30. GLee
    November 18, 2015 at 2:57 pm

    I’m late to this party, but I have to say the 3 stories I’ve read have been excellent.

    The only discordant note in this one was dressing her in a suit. I get the symbolism, but it was redundant with the bondage and pegging. For me, the eroticism would have been heightened (not that it could have gotten a lot hotter) had she been nude and still dominant.

    Thank you!

  31. Denise
    January 31, 2016 at 1:20 pm

    Yes loved this wish I could of read this 3 days ago.

  32. Readers Block
    February 3, 2016 at 8:28 pm

    Awesome stuff, this is the first one I read while researching pornography written by women and I enjoyed your economy of language. This is very much my scene so I don’t know what your other stories are like (yet) but I think that this is hot!

  33. Bob Anderson
    April 27, 2016 at 8:21 am

    Excellent; made me wet. Although not to this extreme of BDSM, I dated a girl once who slid her finger into (TOTALLY unexpected, and totally delightful). Loved being a tiny bit sub, and when she made me cum with her mouth, I thought I had drowned her. But she rewarded me with a wet cummy kiss. Keep up the good work; only just found you site.

  34. Sarah
    May 3, 2016 at 4:26 am

    This was soo good. My boyfriend and I like to experiment with fem-dom and this was lovely.

  35. Ian
    June 17, 2016 at 9:44 pm

    super story

  36. Bootrick Oxmoor
    July 4, 2016 at 2:24 am

    Thank you for the wonderful story.

    I am a little perturbed by the rape; however, he seems to have been ok with it afterward.

    Gotta love a fantasy!

  37. Charlie
    December 22, 2016 at 5:22 pm

    Amazing story, I really like to be dominated and found this a total turn on… I really wanted to be chained to that bed 🙂

  38. Lisle Mitchell
    December 30, 2016 at 10:18 am

    Not what I expected, but I was unable to stop reading. A simple premise well executed. A promise is a promise and not producing is grounds for punishment. I’ve never made a sexual promise I didn’t fulfill, and after this read I never will. Well done

  39. Fia Lee
    April 13, 2017 at 11:18 pm

    Fascinating and a very arousing read. What I like most about your stories is that you get a hint of the characters’ histories, just enough to fill in the blanks to events that led up to the sexual encounter. Reading this in a femdom context is all the more liberating and satisfying, knowing the power dynamic beforehand and how suddenly it had switched. I do admit, his resistance at first did shock me and was a bit disturbing but somehow that wasn’t a turn off and by the end, it seemed like it wasn’t unwelcome within their relationship.

  40. John
    August 9, 2017 at 2:23 am

    Thanks for a great story. I don’t need to be tied up. Being on the receiving end of a crop or a strap-on is a gift.

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