River Mother

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  1. December 12, 2009 at 11:14 am

    Luscious. Vivid.

  2. Lia
    January 30, 2010 at 2:30 am

    Your writing is beautiful. Thank you.

  3. LostPadawan
    November 23, 2014 at 10:04 pm

    The idea of it all!
    It was quaint, and beautiful.

  4. WillDarcy
    July 18, 2015 at 2:02 am

    Wow! I really enjoyed this. for. A short story there is a lot of character development. Thank you for sharing.

  5. Jinxy
    August 6, 2015 at 10:40 pm

    Oh gosh I just loved this story. It got me right in the feels, I smiled, shed a tear. There is a beautiful moral to this story. I think a lot of people would enjoy this. May just have to share it with a few friends.

  6. Isabelle
    August 14, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    Fresh, original setting and characters. You transported me straight into the magical world of the story. Exquisite writing.

  7. Esther
    November 12, 2015 at 3:44 pm

    Wonderful. Just wonderful. I love your work. Your creativity and flair is inspiring. Keep it up!!

  8. K
    December 5, 2015 at 7:48 am


    I really enjoyed this one. Superb writing skills and imagination.

  9. FBWE
    February 11, 2016 at 3:08 pm

    Thank you so much for this. This is heavier than sex, this is life spun with intricate care – it is love and hurt and lust. You are a masterful writer, my friend.
    I would love to hear from the rivers point of view. How she watches her children love each other, and how she – a great, slow, reverent goddess of a being whisks away the child and grows him, and then watches him become something greater than human.
    You are lovely. I will be dreaming dreams built by yourself for ages <3

  10. krystal
    March 1, 2016 at 12:21 am

    wow, this is beautiful

  11. hly
    March 6, 2016 at 9:21 am

    Ending fumbled a bit, but the story and its telling is lovely.

  12. Simo
    March 7, 2016 at 9:08 pm

    This was honey, spring, and sunshine wrapped in a delicious bundle. Mesmerizing writing. Thank you

  13. Michael Stolt
    May 16, 2016 at 2:54 pm

    Men and the culture they have created have been so cruel to women for so long. In this beautiful piece you right a wrong of women across all ages and let the beauty of tender love shine through. Maybe it wasn’t your intention to begin with, but i love that justice is done and that your heroine is made whole. The erotica added the cherry on top. Thank you !

  14. Magna Soror
    June 28, 2016 at 4:26 am

    Your stories are so lovely. I’ve read so many and they bring me Joy. Thank you.

  15. Maggie
    August 16, 2016 at 4:12 am

    I stumbled onto this site this evening. I read through all your stories this evening. These narratives are so expressive of your ability to articulate a situation that is resoundingly familiar, deafeningly human. I enjoyed your intelligent stories because each one has a different mood, the tale has been spun and crafted so elegantly: shifts in time, scene are seamlessly woven into and characters feel whole. I am not so good of telling you how much I enjoyed reading the stories, but what prompted me to respond, is your compassion for your characters which bleeds through every time. Please keep writing.

  16. Eli
    December 16, 2016 at 12:08 pm

    Sent chills through my whole body at the last line. Beautifully written. A real gift.

  17. Keshena
    January 4, 2017 at 9:32 am

    This is real, and beautiful. You are a magician.

  18. Elli
    June 20, 2017 at 7:22 am

    This is my favorite story of all time now.

  19. J
    August 23, 2017 at 1:11 pm


  20. Cait
    August 24, 2017 at 11:48 am

    Well, that was just beautiful…

  21. Eve
    December 16, 2017 at 3:35 pm

    This is honestly so beautiful; thank you for writing this!

  22. Chris
    May 12, 2018 at 12:11 am

    This is beautiful. Really. It’s wholesome and I’m filled with so much warmth and relief from the ending.

    Thank you.

  23. K
    June 17, 2018 at 11:46 am

    The love that was built was set beautifully.

  24. Janu
    July 1, 2018 at 4:32 am

    Beautiful …Has been searching for such a content for long time…Thank u

  25. Daniella
    September 2, 2018 at 2:46 am

    This story is a light tower. Anonymously sharing a comforting feeling of something like home, something unquestionably shared. I’m so glad I find your writing.

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