122 comments for “The Virtue of Patience

  1. Asad
    January 2, 2016 at 7:37 pm

    Please make more public stories like this one

    • January 3, 2016 at 12:29 pm

      I have over 40 stories on this site. Don’t you think that’s enough?

      • Lucy
        April 10, 2016 at 1:18 pm

        I think Asad meant public sex 🙂

        • Dean
          May 22, 2016 at 9:42 am

          Lucy me and you can have public sex

      • amy
        April 17, 2017 at 6:07 pm

        that was perfect and so very well written

    • Lori
      August 12, 2016 at 7:18 am

      Very interesting and sexy! 4 stars, 🙂
      I write some poetry, not erotic, but this has me wanting to try a short story…erotic style.

  2. Amanda
    January 19, 2016 at 1:28 pm

    This was a wonderful story! It kept me on the end of my seat and anxiously awaiting the end. I definitely “enjoyed” this to it’s potential! Thank you so much for your stories; you have such a talent.

  3. s
    January 23, 2016 at 6:31 am

    Hi,
    Pretty nice story, good pacing. My girlfriend read it while I was down on her. She lasted through the fourth page.
    Funny.
    Looking forward to reading more

  4. Rae
    February 15, 2016 at 10:46 am

    I would love a follow up wish I could write this kind of erotica myself

  5. Debora Hill
    February 20, 2016 at 3:44 pm

    You’re good — very good. As a lifelong professional writer, journalist, published author and now Executive Film Producer, I’d say you need to pursue a lot more publication of your work.

    • February 26, 2016 at 5:36 pm

      Thank you Debora.

      Firstly, the current state of the genre means that what I write no longer qualifies as erotica and is too consistently sexual for lit fic. Secondly, considering how badly the publishing world is paying for content, I’d rather post it here online and have the readers than be published, get a fraction of the readers and a couple of dollars royalties every month.

      • MissJones
        May 26, 2016 at 5:40 pm

        Well, we readers are very grateful. Well done – I’ve never before read anything that was genuinely entertaining as a story as well as satisfyingly smutty! With real laughs!

        • May 27, 2016 at 2:45 pm

          Then I am very glad you found me.

        • Andy
          February 5, 2017 at 11:57 am

          I agree with Miss MissJones, humour and pathos are both undervalued aspects of sex, and I enjoyed seeing them presented here. Also this captures the intense eroticism of subtlety, something profoundly missed by most of the erotic writing I’ve encountered. And the finale is good as well; that it’s personal contact and recognition that drives his orgasm rather than some faceless bodice-ripping penetration is fantastic. I sometimes wonder about the ultimate sexual compliment – to come spontaneously from someone’s shear sexual presence rather than direct physical sensation. This captures that nicely.

  6. Anny
    February 22, 2016 at 4:58 am

    I loved reading this as my fiancé pleasured my mound. I lasted with much effort to the end of the story with a strong and exciting finish. That was an amazingly worded story thank you for posting your talented writing.

  7. David
    March 11, 2016 at 10:19 pm

    RG. This is what I have sought but not found until now. It is good writing. It free from the grammatical clumsiness that bedevils much erotic work. It is not formulaic or repetitive. It does not rush to climax. It avoids cliche.

    Those are what it is not. What it is… eerily accurate description of male responses, physical & mental. These are normal people with normal lives indulging normal impulses in credible, if rather risky circumstances. Could they really not be observed in a year of play? Probably not, but there’s the thrill. I am not a woman but this woman’s behaviour reads credibly. She is certainly not some out of control sex machine surrendering to male manipulation… which is the typical & unrealistic fantasy of many male writers.

    As a result, I felt no urge to skip forward, looking for the ‘good bits’. This held my attention & rewarded me as only good writing can.

    Thank you
    David

    • March 21, 2016 at 9:11 pm

      Thank you, David. Or it might be that there are no ‘good bits’ to skip to. Hahahaha. Well, that’s the virtue of reader patience!

  8. Tony
    April 12, 2016 at 9:24 am

    I love this! The lurking danger of being caught. The sinful pleasure of getting away with it. I can identify with the risk of a public place, but don’t think I would have considered a crowded elevator. I guess inspiration comes to different people in different ways. The idea just would never have come to me.

    Thank you. I have to read more now.

  9. Heather
    May 1, 2016 at 11:49 pm

    This is hot. The possibilty of getting caight has always been a turn on for me. U should continue this story where he lives out his fanasty in her and his wife as well.

    • May 2, 2016 at 4:13 pm

      Nah… I started it. You continue it! 😀

    • Dean
      May 22, 2016 at 9:44 am

      Give me your number and you and I can arrange something like this.

      • May 24, 2016 at 3:15 pm

        Why spoil the freedom of the fiction by trying to pull it into the real world?

      • miranda
        June 16, 2017 at 3:21 am

        i would love to do that with you dean

  10. Anita
    May 3, 2016 at 8:41 pm

    Loved it ! Thank you so much.

  11. Ari
    May 4, 2016 at 11:40 am

    Loved this. Pacing was great and the scenes were very sexy. Thank you for writing

  12. Mary Schlemmer
    May 6, 2016 at 11:54 pm

    Love this story – thanks for sharing your gift!

  13. Steph
    May 27, 2016 at 5:57 am

    I am in love with your writing. Wow…. The pacing and detail in this story are incredible, and I now find myself wanting an elevator friend of my own 😉

  14. Lizzie
    June 1, 2016 at 9:03 pm

    Love your stories. Entertaining, teasing and a real turn on.

  15. Rae
    June 5, 2016 at 10:46 pm

    Its so good oh my gosh hot af keep up the good work 🙂

  16. Crystal
    June 18, 2016 at 8:21 am

    Fantastic writing. Not clunky, clumsy or flowery, very deft. Thank you!

  17. Baglady
    July 4, 2016 at 6:51 am

    Nice story! Please keep writing!

  18. Kristie
    July 17, 2016 at 3:46 pm

    Loved it. From start to finish. Agree with a previous comment – didn’t need to skip any parts, all were relevant and building to a great ending. Can’t wait for the ‘next year’ story.

  19. Kemerat
    August 14, 2016 at 10:20 pm

    I love this! Thank you so much!

  20. Joeniel
    August 18, 2016 at 5:58 am

    Totally loved the story… Pleeeease keep on writing

  21. Chris
    August 21, 2016 at 5:01 am

    Very nice. Loved this story

  22. Steve
    October 5, 2016 at 10:06 am

    Wow that was ,without being a pun ,Gripping I could not stop till the end and then went into my own mind. I would like to start my own stories now.

  23. Gil
    October 30, 2016 at 11:01 am

    Your story here, the first I have read by you, is remarkably compelling and skillfully written. Thank you for sharing your work, I look forward to read more. You inspire me to return to writing myself, I have given it a whirl before, and now have an author whose work I can look up to~

  24. Jesse
    November 5, 2016 at 11:27 am

    Make part two, “Next year, Its my turn”

    • December 19, 2016 at 12:20 pm

      Oh, why don’t you have a go at writing part two? Go on!

  25. Cass
    November 10, 2016 at 8:20 am

    You are my forever favourite erotica writer. Thank you so much for existing and writing gorgeously.

  26. Sam
    January 29, 2017 at 9:06 pm

    I love it, the suspense and the yearning is portrayed so well. I could feel his pain! The ability to transport a reader to a place of yearning in themselves is very special. It must have been good I didn’t just skip straight to the pussy section:)

    • February 1, 2017 at 5:59 am

      That’s good, because… there’s no pussy section! Well, except in the reader’s mind. I’m relying on you to co-write it.

      • Sam
        February 1, 2017 at 1:57 pm

        Haha well my mind succeeded in co-writing a pussy section! Thanks RM

        • February 6, 2017 at 1:09 am

          I’m delighted. That’s the best thing any writer can hear.

  27. Shaky
    February 5, 2017 at 8:10 am

    Love the thematic approach to erotic content.

  28. Mark
    February 8, 2017 at 4:39 am

    This was my first erotica I’ve ever read and it fully fulfilled my expectations! I was completely engaged throughout the whole story and I came at the end without any stimulation, I yearn for more.

  29. Max
    February 11, 2017 at 10:48 pm

    Sexy slow burn. Thanks for sharing this story.

  30. Reed
    March 13, 2017 at 12:07 pm

    You’re a talented author. Keep up the good work!

  31. Dance
    March 28, 2017 at 12:50 am

    This was beautifully written. Please know your stories are appreciated and thoroughly enjoyed.

  32. Aki
    April 4, 2017 at 12:51 pm

    This is the one of all your works I always return to. So nonchalantly naughty, excellently written, and with a pace that always keeps me yearning for the next sentence.
    Your works inspire me so muh in my own writing, and i am so grateful that you have these stories published online for us to enjoy.

  33. Tyler
    June 25, 2017 at 10:49 am

    Amazing. Too amazing

  34. Saj
    June 27, 2017 at 4:48 pm

    Beautiful

  35. Allie
    July 9, 2017 at 9:37 am

    So hot. Soooooooooooooooooo hot. I was wet from the very beginning and writhing by the end. When he came in her hand I came without even touching myself. Amazing.

  36. Ruth
    July 10, 2017 at 9:00 pm

    Would pay good money for these ,your great abilty to provoke antcipation makes me read faster than i thought I was capable.

  37. Catfish
    September 18, 2017 at 12:15 pm

    Perfection from start to finish

  38. Giselle
    September 30, 2017 at 8:46 pm

    Very good

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