What You Want

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  1. Chunkmonk
    November 5, 2017 at 10:21 pm

    Story got me hooked , early, to wanting and waiting to find the climax.!

  2. Sunstar
    November 29, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    I was so sad when part 1 was over… Ready for part 2..
    Thank you!!

  3. Melody
    December 27, 2017 at 10:21 am

    Not what I was expecting at all but was a great read!! Loved it.

  4. Kent
    December 28, 2017 at 8:52 am

    I enjoyed the read very much. I will be sure to check out more of your work.

  5. Marco
    January 3, 2018 at 7:43 am

    Very Talented and Erotic.

    Great Twist of plot

  6. Daisy
    January 3, 2018 at 3:29 pm

    Please continue!

  7. Her
    January 12, 2018 at 5:11 pm

    I liked it

  8. BuckRiver
    January 21, 2018 at 3:10 am

    Short and quickly to the point. Have had that kind of experience so know it could have been in real life. Wonder about her.

  9. Edward Brittania
    January 28, 2018 at 8:48 am

    This was so good. It’s something I’ve never had the courage to do.

  10. J.M.
    January 29, 2018 at 4:48 am

    My wife & I just frigged ourselves raw after reading this offering. It was great for role playing adventure.

  11. Chantyse
    February 1, 2018 at 12:19 am

    , I loved it, has a very perplexed suspense that you usually don’t find in a erotic story. Thank you. i enjoyed it very much

  12. A.S.
    February 15, 2018 at 1:36 am

    Your writing is amazing. It nust sucks me in and no matyer what, i want to read more!

  13. K
    March 27, 2018 at 5:10 am

    I read the first half and had to come back to it again later. Just finished the second half, fun read!

  14. Pauline Bernadeth
    April 26, 2018 at 2:27 pm

    Woah~ this is epic. Well written. This is the first fiction that I have read here, and I’ll be surely to read all your other stories. I hope this will inspire me to also write my own erotic fiction in the future.

  15. Elizabeth Horton
    June 2, 2018 at 7:16 am

    That was intense

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