The Virtue of Patience was the outcome of a discussion between Raziel Moore and I. His story – Vertical Hold – based on exactly the same scenario, is now up at his site. Please go and have a read. It’s hot as hell.
Nine a.m. The year may start new for everyone else, but for me it is just another ride up to the 70th floor to another sheaf of reports, another season of accounts. It’s a long ride, and a crowded elevator, and the strange anti-social dynamic of never meeting the eyes of your fellow riders….
Raziel Moore’s (Monocle’s) story is posted on his Erotic Writer site – HERE
Great story
Love it, particularly the end. Stopping at a point of almost climax and leaving the reader yearning for continuance.
Good writing too, descriptive in an easy read, keeps one captured, the right lenght.