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Because I love you Don’t warn me Trust in me If you want me If you love me |
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Because I love you Don’t warn me Trust in me If you want me If you love me |
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Excellent. It has taken me to the root of you where I have found a serious passionate heart. Actually, I madly love poems.
Whenever I read a poem I feel I am alive; have a heart which is beating.
In Bengali, there are lines like:
Persons who doesn’t know how to love poems remain slave forever.
I thank you for sharing me such a great work. Applause.
This doesn’t sound like you… but in a good way. Rather, it seems like a side of you we don’t see very much. Beautiful and sensual though, and poignant as always.
I like the way you put your words together in this one.
I love the juxtaposition of the lines and the rhythm of the staccato sentencing. I took a moment to read it out loud . The poem has an emotional quality too it that I can’t quite pin down in my head but I like it. I’ve felt it and the poetry brings back echoes of remembrance . Kudos. I found your blog clicking links on Tutivillus’ blog. Glad I took the random chance. You seem very well spoken and creative.
I love this poem for it’s brevity, rhythm, intelligence and articulation of the submissive quality of love. I adore the “depths” of passion so this mirrored beautifully that which is rarely spoken between lovers but unconsciously acted out. At least, in my opinion.
I don’t know if you’ve ever seen it but this poem reminds me of the book Damage by Josephine Hart. I know talent when I see it :).