Kiss of Fire

kissBlair had never kissed anyone, ever.  And, of course, no one had ever kissed him. That seems obvious, but when people kiss, it’s never really clear who is doing the kissing and who is being kissed once their lips meet.

I met him at a craft fair in Camden.  He watched me weld the edges of a copper sculpture together. That wasn’t odd in itself – lots of men like to watch girls weld.  Something about the goggles and the gloves and stuff. They stand there and fantasize about what’s beneath it. Or maybe it’s the torch. Kind of like girls with guns. Fantasy crap.  Sometimes I get guys who want to talk shop, discuss the relative merits of different rods, but that stuff doesn’t interest me. I only taught myself to weld because I wanted to make the sculptures. I’m not fetishistic about it.  It’s just a means to an end.

But Blair wasn’t one of those guys either. I could tell he didn’t really care about the process. He was antsy and impatient for me to finish, shifting his weight from foot to foot, crossing and recrossing his arms over his bleach-stained black t-shirt.  The first thing I noticed, when I took my goggles off and looked up was that he was sporting a lot of ink, everywhere.

“Hi,” he said. “Is this your art?”

If I couldn’t tell that he wasn’t in the market for an art piece by the tone of his voice, one look at his face clinched it for me.  It sounds awful to say he was hideously ugly, and it wouldn’t be strictly true. Underneath all the ink and the piercings and shit, he had once been a handsome man. I could have overlooked the christmas tree worth of stuff hanging from his ears and jammed through his lips and eyebrows, but it was the swastika on his cheek that did it for me. It was impossible to ignore and impossible to look at it for long. My very first thought was ‘asshole’.

“Yup,” I said tightly, turning back to the work.

“I like what you do,” he said.


“Can I buy you a coffee, or a pint?”

I kept my eyes down. “Nope.”

“Why not?”

I found the next piece of copper to join to the structure and shook my head. Blunt is always best, I figured. “I don’t like your face.”

“I don’t like yours much either.”

“Good, then we’re done.” I said, pulling my goggles back on and reigniting the propane torch.

I started on the next join.  The goggles cut peripheral vision, and I figured that if I just ignored him long enough, he’d move on. But when I’d finished and pulled off my goggles again to inspect the weld, he was still there. Still shifting from foot to foot.

“Don’t you take commissions?”

I sighed and looked up at him. “You’re kidding.”

“No. I’m not.”

“You can’t afford me.”

“Yes, I can.”

It really was hard to look him in the face. All that mess was just so hateful. Symbols, signs, icons. People don’t think they matter, but they do. They speak just as loud as any voice, with all the weight of history and the meanings we’ve piled onto them. Blair had a face that screamed at me, even with his mouth shut.  “Look, I’m really not interested.”

“I wouldn’t ask you to make anything you’d find offensive.”

I sat on my haunches and put the torch down. I was broke.  It wasn’t like I was overburdened with commissions from rich collectors. The last one I’d had was for a primary school south of the river, six months before.  I’d only sold two pieces since then.  My money was running out and I didn’t want to suffer the humiliation of signing on for the dole again.

“What exactly do you want?”

“I’d rather not discuss it here.”

“I thought you said you didn’t want anything offensive? I’m not bloody making you an eight-foot Nazi sculpture for your living room.  I’ve got ethics, you know.”

He looked dismayed. At least I thought it was dismayed. It was hard to tell with all that junk on his face. “It’s nothing like that. I just…” he glanced around; people jostled him as they brushed past. “I just don’t want to talk about it in a public place.”

* * *

It wasn’t really the prospect of a commission that made me relent. It should have been – I needed the work – but it wasn’t.  What finally prompted me to pack up my gear, store it in the locker beside the stall and walk up to the pub on the corner with him was his ugliness, the handsomeness it was hiding, and curiosity about what a man like him could want.  I have always loved a good puzzle.

That’s what I was thinking as I sat at the little table, awash with prior alcoholic spills and watched him order our drinks.  People allowed the man his space. Up at the bar, bustling with punters, they gave him a foot’s clearance on either side. The bartender kept his eyes on his work and barely looked at him when he handed Blair his change.  What would it be like, I thought, to go through life with a face like that? One that frightened people into maintaining a conscious distance? It might be very convenient in a lot of situations. But lonely, I thought. In the end, it would be achingly lonely. Why would anyone in their right mind consign themselves to that kind of exile?

I’m no great beauty myself. There was a time when I’d been angry about that. I saw just how much easier it was for pretty girls to have the things they wanted given to them. But then I saw that being given things had its downside. I watched the pretty women I knew make so many compromises, get snarled up in webs of expectation and obligation. And it turned out that being pretty was never enough in itself. People wanted to possess that beauty, to say they owned it, to consume it, to wear it, to employ it to enhance themselves. At worst, beauty made you a public spectacle. At best, someone always expected a blowjob as well.

I came to the conclusion that getting what you wanted for yourself was less complicated, and you didn’t owe anyone anything. I only had to suck dick when I felt like it, and I still got laid as often as I felt the itch.

Having mused on all of that, by the time Blair sat down and slid my pint across at me, I was ready to engage with him on another level. For a while we just drank in silence, and I looked at his face. Really looked at it. And the more I looked, the more the swastika and the bullet piercing his eyebrow and the inked noose around his neck, and the ragged scar that meandered, like a tear streak, down from the corner of his eye to his jawline, stopped offending me. The spider-web at his temple, the enigmatic numbers on his upper lip, the badly inked Frankenstein bolt on his other temple. It was like sifting through the contents of a charity shop.

“Most people don’t look as long as you.”

The movement of his face was a bit of a shock. I’d been lost in my scrutiny. “I bet. They look away, don’t they?”

“Usually. Or they end up bleeding and unconscious.”

I sat up and put my pint down. “Is that a threat?”

“No. Just a fact.”

It’s not like I was actually worried he’d hit me.  “Were you as angry before you got all that crap done?”

He met my eyes and worried the ring in his lip with his teeth for a moment, then settled his mouth into a thin smile.  “I got the crap done because I was angry.”

“It didn’t help, did it?”

“No, not at all. Can we talk about the commission?”

“Sure,” I said, rousing myself and pulling my notebook and a pencil out of my knapsack. “What were you thinking of?”

“I need a pair of lips.”

I smiled. “You already have some, underneath there, somewhere.”

“A pair of metal lips.”

“Like the bloody Rolling Stones thing? With the tongue lolling out?”

“No. Just a pair of lips.”

“Do you want it flat or in three dimensions? Like, plumped out lips, or more like a cartoon?”

He thought for a while. Closed his eyes, recalling I guessed. I waited.

“I want…” he hesitated, then opened his eyes.  It was only then I realized just how beautiful they were. Like tiger’s eyes. Brown and gold flecked. Warm and rich and full of pain. They were, I had to admit, very sexy eyes.  “I want a kiss.”

“A kiss?” I repeated, mechanically, because I was unable to look away from those eyes. Once I’d noticed them, amidst all the other distractions, I couldn’t stop. It was a shock to realize I did want to kiss him. To close my eyes and feel the warmth of that flesh surrounded with all the detritus. To feel the cold bits of metal interrupting the contact with flesh.  There was something so chaotic about all that anger. I thought I’d be able to taste it on his mouth.

“Yes, a kiss.”

I gnawed at my own lip, feeling its plumpness.  “Well, lips aren’t really a kiss. But, I guess you want pursed lips, yeah? A kissy mouth?”

Glancing down at my notepad, I sketched furiously, quickly drawing a series of lip outlines, pursed for a kiss.

“It needs to be very simply done. Just enough lines of metal to make it obvious that it’s a kiss.”

“Stylised?” I muttered, continuing to draw all sorts of kissy mouth shapes. Plump ones, thin ones, mouth open, closed.

He moved closer along the bench and looked down at the pad. “Yes. Not too plump. Not stupid. Just… real. As close to real as you can.”

Then, he put his index fingertip down on the notepad on top of one of the sketches. “That one.”

“Okay.” I glanced up at him.

He moved away skittishly along the banquette and then over onto the stool across the table. “Yes. Exactly like that,” he said, taking a pull of his pint and looking away.

I guessed that whatever momentary bonding we’d just done was over. “What kind of metal?”

“Stainless steel.”

Puzzled, I shook my head. “I don’t work small. I don’t make jewelry for piercings.  But I’m sure you could just go out and buy something like that.”

“No,” he said. “I want it big. Not for a piercing.”

“Then what?”

“I want to mount it on a wall.”

“How big?”

Blair thought. Raised his hands to his chest. Thought again. Did odd things with the shape of his open hands.  “About that big,” he said, showing me a distance of about six inches between his palms.

“That’s still a bit small for mounting on a wall. Wouldn’t you like something bigger? And aluminum would be a fuck of a lot cheaper than stainless steel. I can polish it and varnish it so it doesn’t haze over, you know.”

“No. It needs to be stainless steel.”

I shrugged. “Okay. You’re the client. Anything else?”

“Can you mount it?”

“Of course.”

“On ceramic or stone or something?”

“Yes, of course. Which would you like? Granite might look good.”

“Granite then.”

* * *

I did do all the due diligence and took down his contact details and told him I’d get back to him with an estimate cost, but I needn’t have bothered, because on the way down to catch the tube he pushed his hand into mine, and I ended up taking him back to my loft.

All the way there, the other passengers looked at him and then looked away.  They left the momentary contact with scowls on their faces, or a shake of the head, or pursed lips, but not the kissy sort. Part of me kept wondering why I was taking this man back to my place. Then I’d glance at him and feel a sort of gnawing hunger for him. It was all that mad energy, I think, that made me feel that way.  The prospect of fucking a whirlwind, like the fascination of looking up at a funnel cloud. As if underneath, there was this strange natural phenomenon that was both frightening and thrilling.

* * *

I let him through the door and into my mess of a loft. Bits of metal everywhere, and my workbench. It still stank of hot copper from the work I’d done in the morning before I’d left for the craft show.

“I’m sorry about the mess,” I said, not really meaning it.

“Don’t be.”

I tried to kiss him then, but he turned his head and wouldn’t let me.  When I tried again, he pushed my face away with the palm of his hand.

Standing back, I glared at him. “I didn’t ask you up here to see my etchings, you know.”

“I know.”

“So what are we doing, then?”

He was silent for a while, walking around the space, eyeing my bench, and my unmade bed, and the cobbled together kitchen in the corner, until he stepped up behind me and circled my waist with his arm. He pulled me back against him and he was hard.

“I don’t kiss,” he said, smearing his cheek against mine.

“You don’t…” but I never managed to finish the sentence. He’d popped the button on my jeans and slid his hand down the front of my knickers. A man with really good fingering technique can make me forget almost anything.

The ink and the piercings and the purposeful scars didn’t stop at his face.  I wish I could remember most of them, but time and other things have faded my memory. I do remember sucking his cock, if only because it was also pierced and I worried my teeth might catch on the ring and do him damage. But it didn’t worry him at all. He simply grabbed a fistful of my hair and came down my throat with a satisfied groan.

It was the fucking I remember. After he’d rolled on the requisite latex, pushed my legs apart, and seated his cockhead between the lips of my cunt, our eyes met. Once again, I was drawn in to those deep brown irises and the black pupils they surrounded.  It was a strange sensation to be so horny, so aching to be fucked, and yet stunned into immobility by the vertigo of his eyes.

“Don’t look at me,” he warned. “Turn your head or I’ll fuck your ass.”

I swallowed and raised my chin in defiance. “Make me,” I said, and a delicious, awful queasy terror raced up my spine. It felt brazen and combative and hungry all at once.

With one big hand, he cupped my face and turned it aside.  That’s the way he fucked me. Holding my head so I could not see him. At first, I was so angry, I felt the first thrusts, but it was as if I was out of my body, looking at these two mismached people go at it.  Slowly, as he kept thrusting into me and twisting his hip as he seated his cock, something changed.

There was, I realized, no obligation to look at him. No need to make sure my expression was appreciative or benevolent or approving enough. It didn’t matter who he was. Only that I was being fucked and it felt good. For a while, that sense of utter disconnection seemed erotic in itself. The sheer vacancy of it almost made me come.  But then, in a single note of breath, of quiet moan, it changed. I heard it in his sounds first, but then I felt it in his muscles, smelled it coming off his skin with his sweat. His hand shifted from my face and fisted into my hair. It might have been the normal climb towards pleasure that happens every time, but I didn’t think so. It was an awful, inexorable wounded rage. And there was no maintaining that sense of disconnection anymore: a searing, invasive desert wind that burned me up from the inside out. I came just seconds before he did.

Later, after he fell asleep, I sat cross-legged in bed and rolled the one cigarette I allow myself each day. Asleep, he was beautiful. All the wreckage on his surface just floated there like so much litter on a pond, which doesn’t stop the pond from being beautiful.

I thought about leaning over and kissing his cheek while he slept, but I didn’t. It occurred to me that there was something unethical about that. Like robbery. I lit my fag instead.

* * *

I completed my commission for Blair the following week. A cut steel stencil of a pair of lips in the act of a kiss, mounted on a lovely slab of black granite that contrasted nicely with the work itself.  I was pleased with the work. Not because I was crazy about the symbolism, but because I’d been a perfectionist about the finishing. It would look nice mounted on a wall, even if it was a little small. But I’d raised the lips enough from the stone to allow it to cast a neat, clean shadow in angled light.  It would look just as good sitting on a table, with the lips floating above it.  I wouldn’t have called it a work of art, conceptually, but it was a very satisfactory piece of design. We’d spoken during the week, but he’d never mentioned anything but the sculpture and, taking my cue from him, I’d kept it strictly business.

“Would you like to come and pick it up at my loft?” I asked, when I rang him.  I admit to being hopeful of another evening in bed.

“I was hoping you could bring it over to my place and help me mount it on the wall and…” his voice trailed off.

“And other things?” I said. I’ve never really believed in beating around the bush with someone I wanted to fuck.

“Yes, other things.”

“Sure. What’s your address?” He gave it to me and I agreed to meet him there at seven in the evening.



“Bring your propane torch?”

“I don’t need it. I’ll bring a drill and some brackets to mount it.”

“Bring the torch.”



* * *

I didn’t fancy lugging all my tools as well as the sculpture with me on public transport and, being carless, I had to borrow it off my downstairs’ neighbor who makes oak furniture. I bartered for it with a set of custom-made drawer handles.

The address surprised me.  I guess I had expected him to live in a squat somewhere, but he lived on a thoroughly middle-class street of the quiet Victorian variety. The sort of place where housemaids used to get knocked up and kicked out, and now people run wife-swapping soirees that eventually end in divorce. I pulled into the graveled forecourt in front of red brick house with lovely pseudo gothic arches on the windows.  Blair met me at the door and helped me carry my things inside.

The place was eerily empty of anything. No carpet on the floors, no furniture, no pictures. Nothing. It was all painted a prim, glossy cream, but that was the extent of the decor.

“I thought you lived here,” I said.

“I do. I just don’t use it. I have a room upstairs. I mostly just live in there.”

“Are you trying to rent it out?”


“So where would you like the sculpture?”

“Upstairs. In my room,” he said. Our eyes met briefly. He seemed uncomfortable, nervous.

“You don’t want it here in the living room? It would look very nice on that wall, above the fireplace,” I suggested.

“No. Upstairs. I’ll show you,” he said, picking up my duffle bag of tools and starting up a winding, wooden staircase. “Bring it.”

His room on the floor above was at the front. It was big and high-ceilinged and almost as bare as the rooms on the ground floor.  There was a mattress on the floor, and I was pleased to see he was just as domestically challenged as I was.  Against the back wall, he had a desk with a laptop on it, and a small bookshelf full to the brim with tattered novels.  There was one large photograph on the wall opposite his bed. It was framed like an art photo.  The subject was a smiling young girl, standing on a pebble beach with the sea churning in the background. Even though the photograph was in black and white, it was obvious by the light that it had been a grey day.  The girl had struck a rather glamorous pose and her cotton dress and long dark hair were both caught up in the wind coming off the sea. There was something familiar about her.

“It’s a marvelous picture,” I said, setting the sculpture down on the floor and moving closer. It was an old photograph. The grain of it, and in the style of the girl’s dress. “Did you take it?”

“No. My mother did.”

“Who’s the girl in the picture?”

“My sister Emily.”

“Oh, yes. She looks a lot like you. I can see it in the bones, and the forehead. And the mouth.”

“We’re twins.”

“What about you? Where are you?” Because it struck me in that moment that when people had twins, they were mad about taking pictures of them together. As if they wanted to capture the phenomenon of sameness over and over again.

“I’m over to the right,” he answered. “Not in the picture.”

“Why not?”

“She didn’t want me in it.”

“Your sister?”

Blair was silent for a while. And the silence made me feel unaccountably guilty for having asked the question. Finally he spoke in a low, blank tone. “No. My mother.”

* * *

Blair wanted the sculpture on the opposite wall, above his bed, so we pushed the mattress away from the wall and I got out my drill and the brackets to hold the granite. He was very sure of exactly where he wanted it placed.  Rather too low on the wall, as far as I was concerned. I explained to him that it would look better just below eye-level, but he didn’t seem to care.

I used a spirit level, marked the corners and after sinking the bottom brackets into the plaster, got him to help me hold the piece in place as I installed the top and side brackets.

“What do you think?” I asked, stepping back and looking at the piece from a distance.

He smiled and pushed a fold of fifty-pound notes into the back pocket of my jeans.  “Thank you. I think it’s perfect.”

I felt the sting of regret. It was done.  I looked over at him. “I guess that’s it, then?”

“No. I need you to do one more thing for me,” he said, pulling his cotton long-sleeved t-shirt over his head.

I grinned and laughed. “Oh, I think I can do that.”

Blair tilted his head in an apology. “Not that, actually. I need you to heat it up.”

“You what?”

“Heat it up with your blow torch.”


“You’ll see.”

I folded my arms over my chest and stared at him.  “No, I need to know why I would ruin the finish on a perfectly good piece of my sculpture.”

“It’s not a piece of sculpture.”

“Fuck you. If you didn’t like it, why didn’t you just have the balls to say so?”

“I do like it,” he said, sliding his arm around my shoulders. I shrugged it off but he pulled me into his chest. “I just meant that, to me it’s not a piece of sculpture.”

“What is it then? A fucking door knob?” I said angrily.

“No. It’s a brand.”

* * *

No, not brand as in luxury brand, he explained.  We sat on the floor and I cried.  And Blair admitted to me that yes, it had been his plan all along. And yes, he’d known that if he’d told me, I would never have made it for him. And yes, that’s why he’d asked me to bring the torch.

“I’m not asking you to do anything to me. Just heat it up.”

“Why?” I bleated pathetically.

“I can’t explain it. It’s way beyond words. It’s just something I need. I need it.”

“I don’t understand.” But I did, of course, as I looked up into his face. All the scars and the tattoos and the piercings. He wanted just one more angry mark on his body and he’d used me to get it. And still those beautiful brown eyes, peering out from all that anger.  “No, I can’t do it. I won’t do it.”

“Then I’ll just buy a torch and do it myself,” he said coldly.

“It’s fucking big. It’s going to hurt like hell.”

“I know.”

“Then why? Let’s just fuck and forget it. I’ll take the sculpture back. You don’t have to pay for it.” I reached for his hand and he let me take it, curled his fingers into mine.

“It’s not enough.”


He shook his head. “I…” and his jaw worked, trying to pry out words that he obviously couldn’t find. “Please,” he said.

I sat there looking at him in that blank room, with the smug, happy little twin on the wall. And opposite the thing I’d made. Which looked sinister to me now. As if there were teeth just beneath those metal lips. What if I let him do it on his own, and he fainted and burned the house down, or hit his head and bled to death?


He smiled and looked relieved. “I’ll pay you for the extra time.”

“Fuck you. This,” I said, trying to put it into words, “can’t be a transaction.”

“No. I guess not.”

* * *

As small as the piece was, it took some time to heat it to cherry red.  And still I worried that it wasn’t evenly hot enough. It had to be red hot, Blair said, to mark just right, so the skin seared and didn’t tear, coming away from the metal. My hand shook as I played the torch across the metal surface, long, constant even strokes from below, letting the metal and nature take the heat upward to the top of the piece.

“What about after,” I said out loud. “What happens after? Do you have bandages?”

“No. It’s best if you just leave it open to the air.”

“What if you faint?”

“Then I faint. Just don’t let me fall on you. I’m heavy.”

“Shut up. Fuck. I don’t know why I’m doing this.”

“Is it ready?”

I stood back from the metal, glowing even and pale red, and shut off the torch. “God, I don’t know. I think so.”

He stood beside me and looked at it. “I think we’re good.”

Without warning, he wrapped his arms around me, turned, and pressed his back flat against the searing steel.

It was, in a way, our very first kiss.

  43 comments for “Kiss of Fire

  1. jess hopkins
    July 7, 2013 at 5:08 pm

    I liked that. Nice juxtaposition between the businesslike narrator and her more ‘abstract’ opponent. And I’m always a sucker for characters with a non-standard relationship with extreme pain.
    I look forward to reading that when you finish tinkering with it.

  2. Paul.
    July 7, 2013 at 5:42 pm

    god, woman, you can write.
    This made my neck hair stand up, and I shuddered, horribly brilliant.

  3. July 7, 2013 at 7:13 pm

    Wow. I didn’t anticipate how much I’d like this. You have a way with expressing darker emotions and making the reader feel all that. Makes you want to take a second look at people I tend to fear and want to look away from.

  4. Des Sert
    July 7, 2013 at 9:21 pm

    What a brilliant piece… the fact that you leave the internal reasons for the act to the reader’s own imagination and thought is simply GOLD… Thank you

  5. Ashes
    July 8, 2013 at 5:43 am

    Deep, dark, tormented and not narrated to death. All the fantastic things always offered forth in your writing. Like snow white’s heart offered up by the huntsman.

  6. July 8, 2013 at 10:47 am

    Hooked and anchored from beginning to end..Girl, you can write! Not sure yet what to make of this, or even if I have to make something of it…horrified, fascinated…and wanting more…not necessarily of this, but more of your work. Wanna see the tinkered end…Excelsior!

  7. July 8, 2013 at 11:26 am

    You hooked me in the descriptive way of this male character, as my memory played on first time I met my tattoo artist who fit this bill to the tee! Feeling as this female character as well…Wow can’t wait for the finish of this!

  8. July 8, 2013 at 1:40 pm

    Deeply moved and disturbed. Sorrow & anger. The story is echoing in my thoughts, as if it had become my own memory.

  9. TFP
    July 8, 2013 at 6:15 pm


    After reading many of your pieces, I often have a mixture of emotions that run the spectrum from joy to frustration. I really enjoyed this but when I finished I wanted more, I want to know more of these two characters past, present, and future. A trait of a good writer, leave you leave the reader wanting more!

    Your work is very much appreciated!

  10. Madeline Moore
    July 10, 2013 at 12:39 pm

    I love that you write about fucking ugly men. The strong sense of foreboding I felt as she went up to his room made me shudder, although I knew he wasn’t going to hurt her. I guess I knew he wasn’t going to fuck her again, either. As mentioned, I like the fact that most of what’s going on with him is left out. I don’t imagine the reader should or could know more about him than the narrator.

    You are the only writer I “know” who posts unfinished work. Very brave. When I was very young I went to the Banff School of Fine Arts for six weeks to attend the Creative Writing program. Our primary tutor was Canadian poet Al Purdy. He was a “people’s poet.” He entered the classroom on the first day, set his briefcase down, opened it, withdrew a bottle of beer and opened that. He proceeded to read a poem to us that he was having trouble finishing. He then asked for suggestions. We were all dumbstruck but eventually some of the students offered ideas. And the writing class was underway.

    I imagine you must be a wonderful teacher, too.

  11. Deliriumtree
    July 19, 2013 at 10:20 am

    I had no idea where this was going, but I loved it. Although, I’m confused, what did she bater for in exchange for the custom handles for her oak loving neighbor? Was it a car? Pretty sure it was a car, but not entirely sure. He could have an old grocery cart laying around, or one of those nifty rolling carts old ladies use, all it says is “it” Use of a car maybe? Would her neighbor really give her a whole car just for drawer handles? Sweet! That’s lunacy though, no matter how nice the drawer handles are. Maybe his standards are really low. Maybe he hates that car and is getting a prius. Sorry, I read that bit 10 times, and it shouldn’t matter, but I’m me, so I’ve spent way too long thinking about this.

    • July 21, 2013 at 6:43 pm

      She just bartered the use of the car, to take her sculpture and the tools over.

  12. C
    October 20, 2013 at 1:10 pm

    I didn’t expect to like that as much as I did.
    That was… Uncomfortable and very beautiful.
    Thank you.

  13. Hello, Kitty
    January 18, 2014 at 4:11 am

    fan. for. life.

  14. Melanie
    February 18, 2014 at 4:28 am

    Well written and captivating. It was dark and deep with pain and longing.

  15. Guinivere
    April 25, 2014 at 12:25 pm

    I’ve read many of your stories, RG. This is the first that has made me cry, not at the time, but later, when I was describing it to someone else.
    The psychological pain and self-loathing that drives this man’s actions is heart-breaking. Sorry to use such an overused word. The tantalising hints regarding his pathology do not serve to mitigate anguish on his behalf.
    Thinking about the way he embraced Alicia and held her as he rolled onto the brand, like a willing sacrifice , affected me deeply.
    Your image of the litter on the surface of a beautiful pool of water , in reference to his chaotic appearance, was exquisite.
    My only question, not very important, was how a man who had outcast himself from society developed a good fingering technique? But as I said, that’s not important in this savage story.

    • April 25, 2014 at 6:56 pm

      Now that is an excellent question. The interesting thing about sex is that it’s never really about technique is it? It’s about listening to and observing the other person’s reactions sincerely. Doing more of what they seem to like and less of what they don’t react to. Don’t you think there’s an interesting parallel to listening? There’s a world of difference between a trained listener and someone who listens carefully and sincerely because they’re genuinely interested in what you’re saying. Having spent most of my life as an odd looking woman, I can assure you that acquiring expertise is really quite easy as long as you don’t mind sticking with your own kind.

      On the subject of sacrifice – I’ve been thinking a lot about this, from a theoretical point of view. George Bataille wrote about it extensively in The Accursed Share (as a mode of disposing of excess in the general economy). He revisited it in his book Eroticism: Death and Sensuality. A number of French thinkers, particularly Lacan, also looked at it as a way to explain a certain type of jouissance. And in essence, what is Martyrdom but sacrifice? And there is always an erotic passion that surrounds this kind of surrendering up of the self.

      • Angela
        March 2, 2016 at 4:41 pm

        I know a guy who was very insecure and read everything he could about the female anatomy so he would be good in bed. Perhaps this would have been the case with this lost soul. He wanted to make sure he was prepared to fully pleasure a woman.

  16. Sunny
    April 29, 2014 at 11:01 pm

    Okay, huge fan but I actually wish I didn’t read this one. Not that it wasn’t interesting because it was. I can handle the way you finish you stories… Gaijin, Beautiful Losers, the Waiting Room. But this one is not finished. I need to know why he wants to make himself ugly. His Mom? Why did she not like him? I can handle it if I knew but I am guessing you are finished with the story so I will never know – which will play on my OCD like a bitch. I can handle a tragic ending because life is usually tragic within itself but I need closure.

    But… you are the author so therefor it is your right to do as you please.

    • April 30, 2014 at 5:53 pm

      “I need to know why he wants to make himself ugly. His Mom? Why did she not like him?”

      Ah, but you just answered your own question. See? I trust you to know instinctively. And you do.

  17. Guinivere
    May 16, 2014 at 10:29 am

    Hello again, RG.
    Thanks for your thoughtful comment of 25 th April.
    The point that was most striking to me was that it is easy to acquire sexual expertise as long as you stick to your own kind. The problem with sticking with your own kind is that first, you have to identify what your kind is. In itself that takes insight and guts. Some of us never make it that far. Then, finding the others and with it the chance of acceptance and, possibly, fulfilment. Sexual satisfaction would be the icing on that cake.
    Family, or people like them, is supposed to be your own kind. Often it doesn’t work out like that. Blair was rejected by his mother , which is enough to screw anyone over. He externalised his pain with the piercings, tattoos and finally, the brand. Despite his anti social appearance, he had managed to acquire good technique through attracting and being responsive to women. Were they his kind? He wouldn’t kiss them or allow them to look him in the face during sex. Does that mean they weren’t his kind? Was it because of his childhood trauma or self inflicted appearance? I don’t expect you to answer those questions.
    I’m labouring this point because I spend a lot of time thinking about kind, or kindred spirits, or being on the same wavelength , and why it is that people you feel at home with, or at one with, are so hard to find, let alone have sex with, and, having found them, keep them in your life. Too often they are the very people you need to let go with good grace and good wishes.
    Ok RG, that is quite enough from me for the moment.
    I take your point about the parallel with listening sincerely.

  18. Lucia
    June 12, 2014 at 8:33 am

    That was a very good story. Very well written and i like the mildly grotesque plot twist.

  19. Anastaria
    July 3, 2014 at 1:14 pm

    Wow. It was hauntingly enticing. I love the way you can spin a few words into a whirlwind of explanation. It was incredible.

  20. Anna
    July 13, 2014 at 10:44 pm

    I loved it. So emotionally complicated, the need not to kiss temporarily in a phyical sense but eternally in the brand.

  21. Kaye
    August 20, 2014 at 3:14 pm

    I love this story. It was beautiful. I just do not understand why he wanted lips…..

    • August 21, 2014 at 1:23 am

      Why do YOU think he wanted lips. How does the story start?

      • Patricia
        October 3, 2014 at 2:13 am

        It is the kiss his mother never gave him. Now he is healing the maternal rejection trauma.

  22. Patricia
    October 3, 2014 at 2:06 am

    Waho!!! That’s was completely out of the ordinary and powerful! That’s a great mix of outstanding imagination and writing skills .

  23. g
    March 21, 2015 at 7:10 am

    this is your best work.
    if u had the time and inclination,
    this could make an excellent novel perhaps.
    or not, it’s perfect as is.
    thanks for your efforts.

  24. veronica
    July 30, 2015 at 6:35 pm

    love the depth of the character i found myself sympathizing with him and what could have caused him to become this way instead of focusing on the sex which is such a fresh change from most erotica stories out there.. thanks!

    • July 31, 2015 at 11:30 pm

      I’m really glad you enjoyed it. I actually do think it’s about sex still. Just sublimated.

  25. K
    December 5, 2015 at 10:09 am

    I did my want that to end.

    Truly a well written one

  26. Angela
    March 2, 2016 at 4:57 pm

    That was a fascinating read with real depth. It brought out a lot of emotions, and I believe Blair and Alicia must have felt a deeper connection after the branding took place. I am not sure he would have shared his room with her and had her do the branding if he had not trusted her despite it being an act of pain. I know it is a work of fiction, but you created a very round character.

  27. tiger
    April 4, 2016 at 1:38 am

    I’m new to this site and am hooked. Your work encourages – no, demands – me to think, feel, wonder and want. And isn’t that what great writing is all about?

    • April 15, 2016 at 11:02 am

      I’m so glad it triggered that in you. It’s what I set out to do, although I don’t always succeed.

  28. Claire
    April 28, 2016 at 11:52 am

    You such a damned good writer…everything you write is beautiful, whether raw, twisted or tender, so very, very good.
    Brava, thank you, and wishing you well.

    • April 30, 2016 at 11:42 am

      It’s very kind of you to say so. When I read back over my work, I can see some duds, but hopefully, I get better as time goes on.

  29. Claire
    April 28, 2016 at 11:54 am

    P.S. OOPS ! I missed the you “are”

  30. CoffeeBlood
    January 24, 2018 at 10:20 pm

    Hi, new reader of your work and I must say it did not take long for me to become hooked. Your work gives me sort of a Bataille feel but at the same time, yours has a feel all to its own. This story in particular is my favourite so far and I can’t wait to see what else you’ve written. This story brought out such strange emotions from me. The way I related to him was strange. Not the tattoos but the scars and body mods. I would pierce my ears with safety pins and leave them in without changing over to rings. I would sew patches into my jacket with names and chemical constructs of drugs. I cannot wait to read more of your stories.

  31. Hayley
    December 16, 2018 at 2:40 pm

    To be honest I was just on this website to read some erotica. I was NOT expecting to find an incredibly talented writer with pieces that moved me, made me ache, made me cry, and made me think. Wow. Amazing. You really have a talent. Keep writing.

    • February 1, 2019 at 3:04 pm

      Hahahahah. I hijacked you! So glad you enjoyed it, Hayley.

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