Tales of the Mumbai Coven – A Vampire History

The Mumbai Coven traces its bloodline back to an ancient source. Born of unimaginable atrocity, its descendants carry the imperatives that were forged on the field of a great battle, before recorded history.

This is a work in progress. The stories are not sequential, but serial. The work can be read by chapter, or by following the lines of characters who weave their way through the stories.

Reader Participation. I post my writing online as I write, and offer it in its entirety because I believe in the narrative transaction: writer – work – reader. To sustain the relationship, it is important that you comment after reading. This way there is a dialogue between us.

Please feel free to leave positive or negative comments, but be polite, constructive, and respectful of the views of others.

  14 comments for “Tales of the Mumbai Coven – A Vampire History

  1. Carrie
    April 16, 2011 at 5:45 am

    Wow. Super hot and I’m totally hooked by the story. Please keep writing.

  2. TFP
    April 19, 2011 at 6:20 pm

    RG,

    After reading I feel like one of the characters, an incredible thirst for more!

    Thank you,
    -TFP

  3. LMD
    April 21, 2011 at 4:53 am

    I am insanely gripped by this tale, RG. Loving it and impatient for the rest.

    Am curious to know more about Callum’s journey back to England (would have loved maybe one significant encounter en route fleshed out.) Also: am equally curious to discover exactly how the characters in your story are “turned.” What is it, for instance, that Marta does to Stefan to turn him that is different from the out and out kill or the careful puncturing that Callum engages in with the use of laudanum?

    I am not a great fan of vampire fiction, but you have drawn me in fully with your oh, too delicious story-telling which, as I’ve found already with your writing, causes me to care.

    Hope you post more soon. I send you a huge grin of thanks in the meantime. Lx

  4. Tracy
    May 11, 2011 at 9:19 am

    Enthralling, exciting, erotic yet done so tastefully. Like a starving waif I want more

  5. JK
    July 4, 2011 at 8:49 pm

    This is terrific. I echo the thoughts of another commentator in that I’m not a vampire fan ( in fact I’ve avoided all things vampire, especially in recent times), but the eroticism of the legend is pretty undeniable. And you’re clearly a great story-teller, so those two elements make for some exciting reading!

    • July 4, 2011 at 9:02 pm

      Thank you. I’m not actually much of a vampire fan myself. I just found it challenging.

  6. Tarosedorea
    November 15, 2011 at 4:57 pm

    You know, I made the huge, huge mistake of reading the second half of this at uni a couple of days ago. For hours afterwards I was flowing away with wetness and ready to jump out of my skin. I was looking at the people around me in a way I never have before, and if the opportunity for a quick shag had occured, I might have… I don’t know. But fact is: your writing affected me deeply. You drew me in with just a couple of lines and then the intensity, the sensitivity, the.. I’m sorry I don’t really know how to describe what is so special about your writing. But I know that I’m a person who lives mostly through the mind and that your writing goes straight to my mind.

  7. Emilia
    January 3, 2013 at 4:34 pm

    I’m really enjoying all your stories! These are among my favourites. Love the Asian flavours, and I admire your writing; good erotica is very difficult to find. Thank you for what you share.

  8. Tasha
    February 5, 2013 at 1:28 am

    Where can I read chapter 10?
    Brilliant read! Erotic fiction as it should be.

  9. angie
    August 25, 2013 at 6:23 pm

    Beautiful series; words can’t do justice to the raw emotions and lush descriptions. I hope you’ll continue it.

  10. Charlie
    April 20, 2015 at 5:48 pm

    The quality of your writing is wonderful. For every moron who raved about FSOG, I told them there was MUCH better writing available by writers such as yourself and Mike Kimera ( who isn’t writing erotica under that name anymore.) Your character building and motivations are complete and 3d. Really good reading.

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