The Mumbai Coven traces its bloodline back to an ancient source. Born of unimaginable atrocity, its descendants carry the imperatives that were forged on the field of a great battle, before recorded history.
This is a work in progress. The stories are not sequential, but serial. The work can be read by chapter, or by following the lines of characters who weave their way through the stories.
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Wow. Super hot and I’m totally hooked by the story. Please keep writing.
RG,
After reading I feel like one of the characters, an incredible thirst for more!
Thank you,
-TFP
Wow. Thank you!
I am insanely gripped by this tale, RG. Loving it and impatient for the rest.
Am curious to know more about Callum’s journey back to England (would have loved maybe one significant encounter en route fleshed out.) Also: am equally curious to discover exactly how the characters in your story are “turned.” What is it, for instance, that Marta does to Stefan to turn him that is different from the out and out kill or the careful puncturing that Callum engages in with the use of laudanum?
I am not a great fan of vampire fiction, but you have drawn me in fully with your oh, too delicious story-telling which, as I’ve found already with your writing, causes me to care.
Hope you post more soon. I send you a huge grin of thanks in the meantime. Lx
Enthralling, exciting, erotic yet done so tastefully. Like a starving waif I want more
This is terrific. I echo the thoughts of another commentator in that I’m not a vampire fan ( in fact I’ve avoided all things vampire, especially in recent times), but the eroticism of the legend is pretty undeniable. And you’re clearly a great story-teller, so those two elements make for some exciting reading!
Thank you. I’m not actually much of a vampire fan myself. I just found it challenging.
You know, I made the huge, huge mistake of reading the second half of this at uni a couple of days ago. For hours afterwards I was flowing away with wetness and ready to jump out of my skin. I was looking at the people around me in a way I never have before, and if the opportunity for a quick shag had occured, I might have… I don’t know. But fact is: your writing affected me deeply. You drew me in with just a couple of lines and then the intensity, the sensitivity, the.. I’m sorry I don’t really know how to describe what is so special about your writing. But I know that I’m a person who lives mostly through the mind and that your writing goes straight to my mind.
I’m really glad you enjoyed it!